| "The Palace of Justice" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 12:31 EDT
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Wow that was intense and strange... Wu Fei's all in Trowa's face, but how? |
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 11:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^___^ I loved reading this with Trowa's perspective, he's quite funny and the cause is a mystery again. Poor Quat, you show Trowa's very observant of him, but at the same time, he shared that he was a little hurt that he was the last one called. I kind wished Quat had called him too. This is an excellent start, I don't remember if I commented before. Thank you for updating it. Are you fanfiction.net too? |
Reviewed By: tiggeryumyum [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2011 15:05 EST
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Gaaahhhh, I am on the edge of my seat here!! I love your Trowa voice and I'm really, really digging this mystery. Haa, it was great to hear from Hatty again and I love Giles and Nataku!!! Honestly, usually I have a very short attention span when it comes to OCs but these guys are so rich and they really add to the whole feel of the story. The bits about Trowa missing Wufei were particularly great, I loved that line about how Wufei deserved all the thoughts Trowa had ;_________; g-gosh. And such a Trowa way of articulating it! This is just lovely, haha and I am more eager than ever to read the rest!! |
Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: cece_y [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 21:16 EDT
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You totally made my weekend with your 2 chapter update. Trowa is hilarious. I love reading his rapid descent to insanity, especially now with the absence of Wufei. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Title: MORE PLEASE
Reviewed By: saiyanzrepublik [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2011 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. My. GOD. This has to be one of the BEST fanfic I've ever read across any fandom, and I've read A LOT of them... please tell us that you will continue this amazing piece? I happen to be lucky enough to have it recommend it to me by a fellow Wufei lover on LJ... I absolutely love the originality and creativity in this one, and I am seriously in love with the setting of the story... I wouldn't mind living in a place like that... although I would still want to go visit Earth when I can LOL... I love the build up between Trowa and Wufei, and how much Trowa wants and loves him showing through their interactions bit by bit... the development is just so touching and heart warming, and heart breaking at the same time since they keep on getting pulled apart... I can go on and on about how lovely and amazing this fic this, but I'm sure you already know that, so please continue this piece! However long it's going to take you, I will always wait for the continuation like how Trowa waited for Wufei... OK that was kinda cheesy... Hope to see more soon! |
Title: FLOORED
Reviewed By: tiggeryumyum [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2011 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am FLOORED at how amazing this fic is. Just, absolutely floored. I made this account just to be able to review this fic. Not only do you have the characters down PITCH PERFECT, but you've got an amazing pace, and the story itself is so freaking intriguing -- I have to confess I can be a pretty lazy reader, skimming for certain character's names and such, but not once did I feel the need to do that here. I was hooked from the word go. How can I even begin to list the elements of this fic I loved?? I love (and am disturbed by) Hatty, and oh gosh Wufei ;_________________; I love the slow, tentative build between Trowa and Wufei, I love the balance you walk between the group's willingness to kill without going to the over the top Hard Asses that sometimes appear in this fandom - you never forget their humanity and that is SO important and it makes it resonate so much more powerfully with the reader. They're professionals first, yes, but that doesn't make any of them soulless! I am so, so, so relieved to see that this was updated relatively recently, especially considering that cliffhanger!!! PS, I see that you link to a geocities account for the rest of your fics, but geocities is of course gone... do you have any other place that archives all of your work??? I'm desperate for more!! |
Reviewed By: cece_y [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2011 09:53 EDT
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Trowa's devotion is astounding. I'm sorry to see that they've been separated though. :( I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter and hoping that it's coming soon!! |
Reviewed By: cece_y [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2011 06:22 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this, and I'm eager to read the rest of it. I really hope you continue!! |
Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2011 21:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Trowa's being morbid and very fun being it. Am a little confused over the whole flower thing. |
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 20:15 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like how the writing style changed together with the action in the chapters 7-9. |
Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 18:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"When it came to Duo Maxwell, the whole two people never being exactly the same was blessed relief." Brilliant two-for-one characterisation there, both Trowa's way of thinking and Duo's way of being. Also liked the Preventers building, although the "hell, half the old city, was gone." line first had me thinking it had got blown up. |
Reviewed By: kinsugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2011 13:34 EST
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\o/ Finally! Three years' wait for chapter 3... I love your characterization of Trowa, I love that he's the central character and POV, and I LOVE where the end of Chapter 2 left us. Hope you keep closer to SF than fantasy; you're doing a great job. Gonna read 3 now... |
Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 09:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely worth reading. Can't wait to read more. I would offer concrit, but I don't think I'm in any position to offer anything about this story except that I think it's amazing.
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Reviewed By: pinball62 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 19:29 EST
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wow this is getting quite interesting!! really looking forward to what the next chapter has to offer so update soon!
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