| "Trials and Tribulations of Being Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakuya On: July 07, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not to be a bitch or anything, you've got a really great fic going here, but King Henry divorced his first wife not because she couldn't bear children, she did bear one, a daughter named Mary, but he fell in love with another woman and wanted to divorce his current wife, and you got that right. Then came along Elizabeth the 1st. Mary ascended the throne until Elizabeth came of age, and became known as 'Bloody Mary' because she tortured all those who would not join in Catholicism. Fortunately Elizabeth was crowned around three years later. Sorry, I'm a History geek. |
Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, so far ur fic is really good. this is the first high school fic i've read and it's really great. it seems that Chi Chi and Vegeta are still in character! AWESOME!!!! hurry up and write more!! :) |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love this chapter too! ^__^ it's great!!
hehehe aw man twinny, does this mean i cant read
the next chapter that i wanna read? since i have
to wait til u post up all the chapts u got?
*sighs* hehehe ne ways love the way u write
like i always say u got a way with words!!! =)
hehee talkin 2 u on AIM soo =P * * *
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
*HuM* i see i see, interesting start you got
here.. HAHAHA lol ^__^ hey twiny.. just wanted
to say wussup and a great AN u got here! ^__^
dam even you AN's sound extra professional and well written!!
better then the crap i write! hehehe ne ways! just
wanna drop a lyne for my one and onlee twiny!
ja'ne
renchan |
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