| "Trials and Tribulations of Being Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maflo On: April 12, 2005 23:58 CDT
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omg....its already been more than a year and a half since u last updated!!! when r u plannin to continue?? this story is gr8...i cant wait for a soon update..plz dont leave this fict unfinished!!!
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Reviewed By: Jadekim87 On: July 16, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so realistic! You are really good at creating moods and emotions in the story. In the scene where Vegeta tells Bulma about the ... well, you know what, (don't want to spoil for other reviewers) I could feel Bulma's emotions. Outrage, helplessness, anger, sorrow. I could also identify with the characters- Bulma, the intelligent, yet popular genious/beauty/billionaire. Vegeta- well, I only wish there were real guys like him. I also liked how for once, Bulma is not the focus of the story. Bulma and Vegeta are my fav. couple, but the angst between Chi/Bulma/Vegeta/Goku was awesome. I also liked how you put 17 and 18 in the story and Krillin, Yamcha, and Marron, too. I really love the fact that Yamcha isn't some cold hearted flirt that just wants Bulma's body. He's a caring friend who wants the best for her in the anime and also in the story. I am SOOOO dying to find out what will happen to Bulma and Vegeta (especially) and the other characters as well. The only request that I can make is if you could put a little more about how the rest of the group really feels about the wedding. (Ex: is 17 sad for Bulma or a little happy that Vegeta will be out of the picture? Does Vegeta really find Chi Chi that icky? He did think she was pretty hot. And Marron? Does she think at all? LOL) Thanks, and PPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
ICE ANGEL! HAVE YOU FOORGOTTEN ABOUT ALL YOUR REVIEWERS? UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARE YOU TRYING TO TOURMENT ME? UPDATE ALREADY! If you're not planning to continue this story, can you E-mail me at zqureshi@optonline.net. Thanks! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:03 CST
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HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER!!! Sorry, I get like that when I become impatient, but for God's Sake, it's been a little over a month since you've last updated. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Goku and Chi-Chi. They don't deserve this. King Maou deserves to die. Hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I had to read the last chapter again because I forgot what is about but I still love it an hope you make the next chapter a bit faster!!!! thanx |
Reviewed By: Pameris On: September 28, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. very creative. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: HunBun111 On: September 20, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading this story on ff.net and I never finished it, but then I found it here and i'm glad i did finish! great job! kawaii and sad at the same time. boo hoo :-( |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:13 CDT
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he I know that I already have reviewed your story but I like the fic so much.And thank you for adding the next chapter so fast
greetzz from Holland |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He girl I really love your fic and the way you wright it.Even though I`m a B/V fan this one is great .Thats it I hope this review will help you to wright the next chapter SOON!!!!
good luck a dutch girl |
Reviewed By: ChildofSadness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... for all you ppl talkin shit... why don't you try writing a fic yourself... and if you doo... rememeber your the author... and you can do what eva the fuck you want in your story... dam baka's .... i love this fic.... and i think it's great! Ice angel's a great writer.... and if you don't like it... then don't read it... as for this fic centering around chichi, BIG FUCKIN DEAL... maybe it's Ice Angel's fav character... she's the author, if she wants to center it around her then let her.... over all ice, great fic i love it and you know it... and many other people love it too ^__^ all you ppl down on FF.net don't let this get you down twiny.
Ja,
RC~ |
Reviewed By: SheWhoShallNotBeNamed On: July 27, 2002 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno if I reviewed this o fanfiction.net or not but knowing me I bet I didn't. Anyways I really enjoyed this for one it didn't focus around Bulma for a change and because of this you don't get the same plot that most HS fics have. Some of them are written by people that aren't even in high school themselves. I think that those people who say Chichi is too perfect in this fic should shut up because people do it to Bulma all the time and they adore her. My only problem with your fanfic is that Chichi is a bit too perfect and it seems very unrealistic( I never said the perfectionism was a good thing)and slightly over dramatic but it has softened in recent chapters. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 20:05 CDT
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well...i've only read the prologue...but it definitely seems to be really cute...but do tell me one thing? why does this fic have to center around ChiChi, or does it? i only just read the prologue. a writer myself of dbz high school AU fics, actually mine's a college one...but thats a different story- you really seem to have taken a very interesting...but very good twist on the whole outlook. i can see that itz definitely progressing into a very good fic...now onto the next chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 07, 2002 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup?Anyways great fic,but I'd LUV 2 kick ChiChi's ass right now. That bitch ain't that fine! Trust me. And she's not the prettiest thing in the world if you know what I'm sayin. If I were Vegeta, I would have hit that bitch, she ain't strong as him. I wouldn't care if she was a gurl, I'd be like"Lord plez forgive me, but I'm fixing to kick this bitche's ass! Who the HELL Does she think she is. That spoiled lil'bitch. I wonder if she'd cry if she broke a nail. Also, u don't need 2 make ChiChi that mean. Sorry,but I'm a lil ghetto& we don't play that shit where I'm from. That bitch would have gotten her ass kicked on the first day!lol. I'm crazy. I like ChiChi,but she just got 2 MUCH of an attitude up in this fic! She's actin like a spoiled lil'bitch if u ask me. Can't wait 4 da next chappie! Great writting! hehe. Yo,holla at me anytime! |
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