| "Trials and Tribulations of Being Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER!!! Sorry, I get like that when I become impatient, but for God's Sake, it's been a little over a month since you've last updated. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Goku and Chi-Chi. They don't deserve this. King Maou deserves to die. Hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I had to read the last chapter again because I forgot what is about but I still love it an hope you make the next chapter a bit faster!!!! thanx |
Reviewed By: Pameris On: September 28, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. very creative. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: HunBun111 On: September 20, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading this story on ff.net and I never finished it, but then I found it here and i'm glad i did finish! great job! kawaii and sad at the same time. boo hoo :-( |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:13 CDT
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he I know that I already have reviewed your story but I like the fic so much.And thank you for adding the next chapter so fast
greetzz from Holland |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He girl I really love your fic and the way you wright it.Even though I`m a B/V fan this one is great .Thats it I hope this review will help you to wright the next chapter SOON!!!!
good luck a dutch girl |
Reviewed By: ChildofSadness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... for all you ppl talkin shit... why don't you try writing a fic yourself... and if you doo... rememeber your the author... and you can do what eva the fuck you want in your story... dam baka's .... i love this fic.... and i think it's great! Ice angel's a great writer.... and if you don't like it... then don't read it... as for this fic centering around chichi, BIG FUCKIN DEAL... maybe it's Ice Angel's fav character... she's the author, if she wants to center it around her then let her.... over all ice, great fic i love it and you know it... and many other people love it too ^__^ all you ppl down on FF.net don't let this get you down twiny.
Ja,
RC~ |
Reviewed By: SheWhoShallNotBeNamed On: July 27, 2002 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno if I reviewed this o fanfiction.net or not but knowing me I bet I didn't. Anyways I really enjoyed this for one it didn't focus around Bulma for a change and because of this you don't get the same plot that most HS fics have. Some of them are written by people that aren't even in high school themselves. I think that those people who say Chichi is too perfect in this fic should shut up because people do it to Bulma all the time and they adore her. My only problem with your fanfic is that Chichi is a bit too perfect and it seems very unrealistic( I never said the perfectionism was a good thing)and slightly over dramatic but it has softened in recent chapters. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
well...i've only read the prologue...but it definitely seems to be really cute...but do tell me one thing? why does this fic have to center around ChiChi, or does it? i only just read the prologue. a writer myself of dbz high school AU fics, actually mine's a college one...but thats a different story- you really seem to have taken a very interesting...but very good twist on the whole outlook. i can see that itz definitely progressing into a very good fic...now onto the next chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 07, 2002 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup?Anyways great fic,but I'd LUV 2 kick ChiChi's ass right now. That bitch ain't that fine! Trust me. And she's not the prettiest thing in the world if you know what I'm sayin. If I were Vegeta, I would have hit that bitch, she ain't strong as him. I wouldn't care if she was a gurl, I'd be like"Lord plez forgive me, but I'm fixing to kick this bitche's ass! Who the HELL Does she think she is. That spoiled lil'bitch. I wonder if she'd cry if she broke a nail. Also, u don't need 2 make ChiChi that mean. Sorry,but I'm a lil ghetto& we don't play that shit where I'm from. That bitch would have gotten her ass kicked on the first day!lol. I'm crazy. I like ChiChi,but she just got 2 MUCH of an attitude up in this fic! She's actin like a spoiled lil'bitch if u ask me. Can't wait 4 da next chappie! Great writting! hehe. Yo,holla at me anytime! |
Reviewed By: Sakuya On: July 07, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not to be a bitch or anything, you've got a really great fic going here, but King Henry divorced his first wife not because she couldn't bear children, she did bear one, a daughter named Mary, but he fell in love with another woman and wanted to divorce his current wife, and you got that right. Then came along Elizabeth the 1st. Mary ascended the throne until Elizabeth came of age, and became known as 'Bloody Mary' because she tortured all those who would not join in Catholicism. Fortunately Elizabeth was crowned around three years later. Sorry, I'm a History geek. |
Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, so far ur fic is really good. this is the first high school fic i've read and it's really great. it seems that Chi Chi and Vegeta are still in character! AWESOME!!!! hurry up and write more!! :) |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love this chapter too! ^__^ it's great!!
hehehe aw man twinny, does this mean i cant read
the next chapter that i wanna read? since i have
to wait til u post up all the chapts u got?
*sighs* hehehe ne ways love the way u write
like i always say u got a way with words!!! =)
hehee talkin 2 u on AIM soo =P * * *
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 23:02 CDT
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*HuM* i see i see, interesting start you got
here.. HAHAHA lol ^__^ hey twiny.. just wanted
to say wussup and a great AN u got here! ^__^
dam even you AN's sound extra professional and well written!!
better then the crap i write! hehehe ne ways! just
wanna drop a lyne for my one and onlee twiny!
ja'ne
renchan |
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