| "In the elevator" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2010 19:06 CST
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I didn't even know there was a sequel till today when another writer mentioned it. Why do you have it only posted on Dokuga? Post it here pretty please??? If you are still working on it that is.
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 03, 2009 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story can't wait for the next character.Keep up the good work update soon. XOXO
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... really liked it... good job... great work... hope you do a sequel to see what happens after... until next time...
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 01:00 CDT
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:: twitches and growls :: you can't end it there! By the powers that be you CAN NOT JUST LEAVE IT THERE! A sequal, the great Lady Ethril demands a sequal! What happens when she comes too? will a bunch of male demons start flirting with her thinking she's like the demoness'? Would Sesshomaru get totally and completely possesive of her? Come on man, write!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:46 CDT
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you must make a sequel. i would like to know if sess and kagome get together and if kagome is by chance carrying his pup. you never know. his best could of reacted to her being in heat. update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 21:29 CDT
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ah, i want to find out what happens later on. please write more. did kagome get pregnant? does sess work things out about inuyasha working at the company? what does kagomes mom and aunt kaede think about her being in an elevator with sess all night? will sees meet and somehow adopt rin? what about shippo and miroku i havent heard a mention of them yet.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*teary eyed* Sequal?????? Pretty please!
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Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT IS RALLY GOOD I AM A LITTLE TIRED TO WRITE ANYMORE
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 23:50 CDT
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this chapter was pretty good except for the formatting. it's a little hard to read an entire chapter in italics and for some reason the begining of each line is cut off. there will be more than just one more chapter right? i mean will kagome end up pregnant?
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Title: not bad
Reviewed By: kace On: May 03, 2008 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo the story hard i like it it a heat up keep me posted
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was getting SO go it is almost cruel to end it like that... great cliff hanger!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 11:37 CST
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Lol, let the games begin! I cant' wait to see what happens in the next chapter, do the custodians rescue them or are they stuck there all night? I find your Kagome adorable, so shy and insecure yet so smart! I can't wait to see what develops.
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Reviewed By: av On: February 26, 2008 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great fic so far. it's fun, interesting and an easy read which is exactly what i need after work. can't wait till the next chapter :>
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is SOOOOO CUTEEEEEE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Trini421 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hurry up and add the next chapter it seems to be getting really good.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 20:05 CST
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Oh, you can't just leave it hanging like that! Please update soon!!!!
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