| "Reformation/Reaffirmation" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: DynaDee On: February 20, 2008 20:43 CST
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I love this story! Heero and Trowa? Not my favorite pairing, but their strangness and inability to communicate somehow makes sense of the pairing.
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Reviewed By: nishi_pen On: February 15, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more, this is a very enjoyable story, please go more into the whole Duo/Wufei thing, I normally don't like the paring at all, but this story sets it up so nicely. The angst is just right, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out. You have me very intrigued. Please update soon, I am definatly enjoying this. It makes coming home from working at my computer, to staring mindlessly into yet another computer, all the more enjoyable.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Beautiful chapter, I liked the attention to detail here, and of course finally the 'reunion'. t felt and read pretty much how Wufei experiences it - things just happening so fast, then consequences that I think he's begun to tolerate out of a lack of strength to keep up with it all. I'm not entirely sure how, but his temper seems to be towards the end of the scale where he just doesn't have an outlet. The voices in this chapter sound very like coming from Endless Waltz.
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: February 10, 2008 08:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the wonderful chapter. I´m excited about the get-together with Heero and Trowa. Maybe we will receive a little bit more information about them (how they´re bearing Quatres death and if they are also suspicious about it like Duo?)? Well, and by the way, I really like Karl. I wonder who gave him the information about Benny... Thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Dynadee On: February 06, 2008 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you how excited I was to see you have another story to share with us. And like the last one, this looks to be just a good. Poor Wufei. And I agree with Duo, there's something suspicious about Quatre's death... but why hasn't Heero and Trowa looked into it more thoroughly? I'm hoping to see another update soon. Excellent writing. Thanks for sharing.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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Top notch continuation. I'd been worried for a bit after finishing the first chapter, that there would never be more added to it, because that chapter stood so well on its own despite having a plot-arch. Always a pleasant surprise to have fears soothed. The lead-in works nicely, if a bit confusing at the absolute beginning. It's easier to understand the time shift when coming directly from the previous chapter, than having waited for it.
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: February 03, 2008 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story! I dont´t understand why you only got 2 reviews so far?! I love your writing style and your characterisation of Wufei and I really want to know what will happen next. It´s a little bit sad thad Quatre commited suicide, but maybe there´s more behind his death? Can´t wait for an update! The plot is awesome and I wonder who was able to kill Benji in his room/cell. Something is definitely going on behind the scenes of that institution! I´ve also read "Through the furnace" on little piece of GW and absolutely loved it! Normally I don´t like AUs, but your story was so fascinating that I could´t stop reading it. Thank you for sharing. And thank you for your wonderful characterisation of Wufei! Greetings Hisui
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 07:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really nice. Gets right into the action and hits top gear without waiting for anyone to settle - I like that.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 23:19 CST
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Wow. Gripping plot, laced with sadness. Love this!
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