| "The Lies We Tell Ourselves" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2010 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should have turned this into an actual story! very very good!
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Reviewed By: The Assasin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Your first lemon??? You lie!!! i wish i was that good wen i first started out. Mayne, that was...hot. It was erotic & sexy...I have some serious chills. They had some great sex though. i agree you should write more. I for one enjoyed this story as a one shot but i do believe that it'll do great with a plot--and a lot more lemons. Honestly, your good. *gives you best lemon award for the month of Feb*
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fabulous. I hate when one shots come to an end. You start to read and you get all caught up, your heart race increases as the heat picks up and then bam its goodbyes. Uggh, why is that. Somehow I feel as if I had an exceptionally great one night stand. **sighs** I need a cigerette after that one, and damn, I dont even smoke. Lol, thank you!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INTRESTING. I THINK U SHOULD WRITE MORE. NO PRESSURE THOUGH. take ur time. if u like . that is if u wanna. ill be readin others in the mean time. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Chlorophyllistic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Maybe write more? Please? :D
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Title: In shock
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, are you sure that was your first lemon????? That was REALLY good. Granted this topic has been done over and over, but of course that is sometimes easier for your first time. This was really well written and you also did an amazing job of keeping them in character, something I always have trouble with.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 13:27 CST
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I must say, other then a rough start, the one shot turned out pretty good. I would think this could turn into a really good story.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 20:09 CST
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this is a great story
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: aeternitas812 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. You kept the characters in character and made the story believable. I loved it! I love sess/kag stories the most and how you developed the original agreement into an intimate thing flowed very well. I know it was just a one-shot, but if you wanted to, I encourage you to continue it because like I said, it's really great! Maybe Sesshomaru can't or doesn't want to move on and ends up really claiming Kagome as his own and marks her? Just an idea if you feel like continuing. If not, it's still awesome!
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