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| "Conquer Me" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: The Flaming Pheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 02:16 CST
Comment/Review:
that was sweet. I loved it and it serves him right to get tricked and it serves Kagome too. She was a total bitch in this. which i like actually i think Kagome should be with Inuyasha but that's just me so yeah so cool. keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Nightlover On: February 13, 2008 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really quite adored how you wrote this. I also completely agree on the view you put on this. If little Rin, who has fought everyone for her right to stay with Seshomaru, grew up to see her lord overlook her for someone else, someone who threatened her rightful place beside her lord, she would do everything in her power to regain her place. Including seducing her lord and making him realize the error of his judgement in one place oftime. For people who do not believe she would ever act like this, think of it this way, she has been living with Sesshomaru most of her life, she would certainly be able to assmilate how he is in times of dire circumstances. And Kagome taking her place, is a dire circumstance.
| Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 19:48 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great
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