| "Slip of the Tongue" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Sweet_Adeline [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hilarious! You have to continue!
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story I hope you write more soon pleaseeeeeee
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Reviewed By: Nyokogem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not laughed so hard reading a fanfic in a long time. Love the part of Sesshomaru's left hand doing a good job! LOve your story please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PORK HAHAHAA lol..I haven't heard that term in FOREVER. Jesus...I love this story. Its hilarious! HAHA Pork!! LOL. K done. ANYWAYS I love it. GOOD JOB you're awesome at humor... "Jakotsu is a genre of his own" HAHAHA LOL...*hyperventilate*
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
~tba- ok. sessh in his underwear. nice touch. ~sessh- humph. ~tba- oh. poor sessh doesnt like bein mistreated. though i doubt that i care. *shrug* ~inu- WAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM NOT EVEN IN THE STORY! ~kags- rigged coin. damn rigged coins. stupid stupid rigged coin. ~sessh- u know u still didnt sit next 2 me.*smirk* ~kags* has coin in hand* THIS IS ALL UR FAULT! U REMINDED HIM! DAMN U!*THROWS COIN OUT THE WINDOW* ~dai- wait. u mean were gonna die! im too handsome! take the woman! *holds up wife* ~ayumi- u baka! this is how u treat me! ~sessh- well. we get wat we want. they die. every one's happy. ~shippo- no! if they find out i did it! ill be in JAIL! JAIL I TELL U! JAIL! ~kags- come'on. ur being dramatic shippo. ~shippo- DRAMATIC! DRAMATIC! WAT DO U MEAN!?!!!!!*eye twitch* ~sessh- *takes out cell phone* yes. i'd like to call the medical hospital. ~kags- knock it off sessh! ~sessh- wat do u mean? *closes cellphone* ~tba- uh... update soon! bye! ~police- freeze suckers! *pulls out guns* ~tba- damn it! *takes out smoke bomb* so long cops! *evil laugh* throws bomb* ~smoke screen appears +the gang dissappears-~ TBA~
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and the little battles between sesshoumaru and taro-kun but mainly him and kagome I really like what you've done with everyone and having them be a little out of charaters I hope you keep writing more soon.
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Title: This is my Fave comedy story
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LMFAO/ROFL* I used to raed this on single spark but it's so much easier to keep track of it here. I absoulutely love this story! It's soo fucking funny! I just love the way you don't take them completely out of character, and at the same time, turn their flaws and thoughts into comedy! And I love the ongoing battle between Taro and Sesshou. So much fun to read!
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