| "Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 20:29 CST
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Judging by your other works (which total to be two) you are a fairly new author. I have to say, good job! Not many people have decent work for their first story, but yours was actually intriguing (the Inuyasha one…I don't read Naruto stuff, mostly because I don't watch the show). I think that you have great potential here and I personally look forward to more of your work later on if you choose to continue writing FanFics. There is only one this that I think that you could do to make it even better. Add paragraphs. Not only does that make the story look neater, but that will make it easier to read. Keep up the good work, and write more in the future!
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Reviewed By: kiyoraka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it too bad it is a one shot
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 16:13 CST
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Very nicely written. I like this portrayal of Kikyo. She has much more depth, more feeling. It's also easier to sympathize with her here. Again, very good.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... nice portrayal of all three characters... i have a little saying kinda similar too "some say it's holding on that makes us strong; sometimes it's letting go..." good job... great work...
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