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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 00:45 CST
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although this chapter is filler, it has developed kagome's relationship with inuyasha-- at least in his mind. ♥
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: September 23, 2008 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins* Hey, another chapter done so another review is in order. I loved this chapter as much as I've loved the others. Izayoi is such a sweet lady, too bad I can't get an offer like that from someone like her, the pros would by far outweigh the cons. Especially with Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, and Taisho in the house. I couldn't stop laughing when I imagined the little girl helping Sesshy with his work. The vision I came up with was just too damned cute for words lol, as was Izayoi's warning that Sesshy would kill her if he found out she told anyone lol. I laughed myself onto the floor when she slid off the bed too. Gotta love satin sheets. ^^ As for Inuyasha's music, hehe I just know he's doing that to annoy Kagome. I wonder what she'll do as payback, perhaps a little curry or wasabi in his coffee or tea? Anyway, great chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Hope your classes are start ggoing better for you. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looove the story so far..i cant wait to see what happens between kagome and inuyasha. cant wait till u put another chappie up!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay lovvvveee this story so far :D you have done a excellent job! I cant wait to read how Kagome and InuYasha living arrangements are doing lol. I hope you update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:39 CDT
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methinks mum has an ulterior motive. *wiggles eyebrows* ♣ good stuff, one can only hope he gets a clue. ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: August 06, 2008 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps* Hey, long time no see! It's great to read a new chapter for your fic. It's progressing nicely. The sparks between Inuyasha and Kagome are flying but it's nice to see a concerned Inuyasha too. I like how you wrote Taisho into the story as well. He is currently my 2nd favorite character behind Inuyasha. His personality is how I would imagine a father would be to a son who will one day take over a company. The exchange between him and Inuyasha when he informed the young heir that Kagome would be his secretary was funny, and the bit about Kagome meeting the roach in the shower was so funny it was piss worthy lol. On a slightly less amusing note, Kikyo had better not be a part of the equation for long. You've single-handledly made me despise her. Get rid of her now! Also, evil evil cliffhangers, need I say more? Anyway, great story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. *Tosses an Inuyasha plushie your way* See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 18:38 CDT
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sorry i haven't reviewed for a while but i guess you know how life sometimes gets in the way. your story is going really good. maybe you should call your story 'murphy's law', everything that can go wrong will... seems to fit. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 05:21 CDT
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thank you for the update, i really liked it
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the few stories that I find really interesting right now. Being a writer myself, I get kinda picky as to what stories I read... looking for a specific writing style of theme that scratches my interst. So far, your story has really got me glued :). The dynamics between InuYasha and Kagome are fun to read. Poor Kagome though, even though she's things are looking up for her, not all is well in her little world. Kinda sounds like my life right now, so I can relate... too bad my boss is not hot... what? wait...what am I saying? I'm married already ;D... Still fun story. I can't wait to see what you've got instored for Kagome next. Oh, and by the way, I hear ya about the writing. I'm still trying to find time to write the next chapter on my fic. It's half done, and I just gotta find the time to finish it. Between work, school, married life and being a mom, I can hardly find the time for myself, much less writing... -sigh- such is life.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome is loving her job... and after the pranks inuyasha is nicer to her... hope inuyasha's father gives her the raise though... but seems that kagome is gonna be evicted from her apartment... where will she move to... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome was hired by inuyasha's father... seems that inuyasha & kagome have yet to get along... does inuyasha realize that the lady he was watching before was kagome?... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 09:20 CDT
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kikyo "eew, hanyou cooties!" . . . okay, setup complete and on with the explosions i.e: 'kagome whipping yash's ass in shape'! >=) . . . kicking appliances repeatedly will only work in the short term then it becomes rather counterproductive. . . good stuff, *moiimoii (fidget)* eagerly anticipating the games to begin!! ~ a delight, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 00:06 CST
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interesting story, the conditions in which kagome lives is reminiscent of my younger days when i looked forward to 'sample days' and 'deli samples' at the grocery store to get a small meal. did you know you can get a small tray of 'crispies' at 'long john silver's' for free (at least the one i lived near)? . . . glad things are going to be looking up for her. seems that yasha's father is going to train her so he won't have to. . . it' will be funny to see the famous 'kagome temper' directed at an arrogant 'playboy yash'. . . looking forward to reading more. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... looking forward to the upcoming chapters... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: 13lackangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really like it so far... i hope u update soon :) xXx
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