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Reviewed By: IK4LIFE On: March 08, 2009 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. UPDATE SOON PLEASE :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well at least you didnt made Sesshoumaru like a bastard :P and aww he kissed her!!! even if it was a short one, i hope its all better :(
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome & inuyasha may fight but they are getting along... kagome spent some time with sesshoumaru too - funny... so inuyasha kissed kagome and is falling for her... what will kagome do now?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 03:23 CST
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aw poor inuyasha thinking no one will like him because he's a half demon. thank you for the update it was a great birthday present.
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: January 14, 2009 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here I am, back with another review for the newest chapter. *Grin* The name calling contest and resulting tickle scene was funny. It was also so sweet it gave me diabetes, expect a call from my lawyer.(lol, jk) I can't believe Inuyasha scared Izayoi like that, shame on you Inu-puppy. *Smirks as Inuyasha growls* I about died laughing when she asked him if she should expect grandchildren soon though. Seeing Kagome go thorugh the maze with Sesshomaru was worth the price of admission alone, who would've thought that even though he didn't show it he was actually having a good time. And to see that he finally dumped the Wicked Witch of the East, it did my heart good to see that, which of course led up to the moment we've all been waiting for. You know the one. It's too bad things soured again though. Hopefully things will get better in later chapters. And of course the ending where Inuyasha beat himself up while Taisho scolded him was just the right amount of angst for this chapter. Overall I loved it and I'm looking forward to chapter 8. Until then, keep up the great work and I'll catch ya in the next review. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: January 13, 2009 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps* Hey, another chapter down. This chapter was great, I can't believe Inuyasha did that to Kagome's drink. As for the phone call, there's only 3 people I can think of that would make him revert to his sour mood. I won't say who in case I'm right I don't want to spoil it even though the other readers probably know who I mean. It was cool to see him ask Kagome about her family though, something that I was not expecting at all. The interaction between him and Gramps was funny, I can just picutre Inuyasha covered in seals lol. Hehe, and the interaction between him and Koga...priceless. Do I detect a hint of jealousy on Inuyasha's part? I think so. I think he'd better hang on because he's riding a roller coaster of emotions and its name happens to be Kagome lol, he may be right. She may be the death of him, although I hope not. Anyway, great chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more soon. See ya ^_~ Kedaku
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i sat and read all the chapters... im really wrapped in this ^___^ its soo good to have a story that both Inuyasha's parents are in it, it makes it more cute and funnier for us readers XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 00:45 CST
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although this chapter is filler, it has developed kagome's relationship with inuyasha-- at least in his mind. ♥
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: September 23, 2008 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Grins* Hey, another chapter done so another review is in order. I loved this chapter as much as I've loved the others. Izayoi is such a sweet lady, too bad I can't get an offer like that from someone like her, the pros would by far outweigh the cons. Especially with Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, and Taisho in the house. I couldn't stop laughing when I imagined the little girl helping Sesshy with his work. The vision I came up with was just too damned cute for words lol, as was Izayoi's warning that Sesshy would kill her if he found out she told anyone lol. I laughed myself onto the floor when she slid off the bed too. Gotta love satin sheets. ^^ As for Inuyasha's music, hehe I just know he's doing that to annoy Kagome. I wonder what she'll do as payback, perhaps a little curry or wasabi in his coffee or tea? Anyway, great chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Hope your classes are start ggoing better for you. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looove the story so far..i cant wait to see what happens between kagome and inuyasha. cant wait till u put another chappie up!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay lovvvveee this story so far :D you have done a excellent job! I cant wait to read how Kagome and InuYasha living arrangements are doing lol. I hope you update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:39 CDT
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methinks mum has an ulterior motive. *wiggles eyebrows* ♣ good stuff, one can only hope he gets a clue. ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: August 06, 2008 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps* Hey, long time no see! It's great to read a new chapter for your fic. It's progressing nicely. The sparks between Inuyasha and Kagome are flying but it's nice to see a concerned Inuyasha too. I like how you wrote Taisho into the story as well. He is currently my 2nd favorite character behind Inuyasha. His personality is how I would imagine a father would be to a son who will one day take over a company. The exchange between him and Inuyasha when he informed the young heir that Kagome would be his secretary was funny, and the bit about Kagome meeting the roach in the shower was so funny it was piss worthy lol. On a slightly less amusing note, Kikyo had better not be a part of the equation for long. You've single-handledly made me despise her. Get rid of her now! Also, evil evil cliffhangers, need I say more? Anyway, great story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. *Tosses an Inuyasha plushie your way* See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 18:38 CDT
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sorry i haven't reviewed for a while but i guess you know how life sometimes gets in the way. your story is going really good. maybe you should call your story 'murphy's law', everything that can go wrong will... seems to fit. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 05:21 CDT
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thank you for the update, i really liked it
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