| "A Past Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! And what an ending!
I wasn't expecting that! Sequal! Now!
btw psrt 5 of passage through shadow |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Epilogue! Where's the epilogue...
and you'd better fix this Crest!
(pause)
(blink blink)
For me? Oooooo!
Firebird |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firebird: OMG! She killed Ken!
Ken: You had to say it didn't you. You don't even like South Park.
Firebird: True but it had to be said. Hurry up. Post chapter 12. You're driving me mad, Crest! |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You put the same chapter up twice!
Chapters 10 and 11 are identical!
and please don't wait for ff.net to post part 12
Firebird
ps I agree that Athenamon is creepy. She's supposed to be... |
Reviewed By: Crest_of_the_Clow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Firebird, I know I have to get that up and I will when I find it in my email. -_-;; Oh and I read your other two stories on FF.Net only I cant review. *sighs* |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Crest... tis I. You know since you were reposting it you could have put in the corrections from the betaring of part one I sent you. ;-p
Still it's a good story and I'm glad, glad, glad, I'm not the only person to feel like posting here in exsperation with FF.net's current hardware problems.
There's stuff of mine you haven't read yet up on my mediaminer account. Why don't you go and take a look.
Firebird
(though I'm Firebird157 on here)
ps please ignore the kenyako fan but you knew I was going to say that didn't you. BTW Blondie if you read this I'm 30. (Dude? Who uses the word Dude in 21st Century?) |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: July 02, 2002 11:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute, very cute!!!!!! But as I ALWAYS say Make it MORE of a kenyako. . . . . PLEASE!!!!!!!! Dude are you really 14? You know what I was begining to think I was the only person over 13 that actually likes to read digimon fanfiction!!!!! My friend is 15 and writes fanfiction but she HATES digimon!!!!!!! i used to hate it to but I really LOVE the couple kenyako and kaiyako!!!!!!!!! Well finish soon and as always WRITE MORE kenyako!!!!!!! In and Out!!!!!!!!!!
Blondie~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
