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| "The Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very sweet fic. I think it's very original, because usually when Inuyasha waits 500+ years for Kagome, she's alive, still missing him, and they get back together. I think it was a very original twist to have her to have already died before he even got there. See, at first I was thinking that maybe they'd gotten separated by the well somehow, one month after their daughter was born, but when I found out she was dead...aw, that was sad. It was very bittersweet, and I like how appropriate Inuyasha's emotions and actions were concerning her death. Very well done, and tasteful. Good job~ Wowzer313
| Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was lovely... beautifully written. I really liked it!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... mellow and sad... kinda sad that kagome died giving birth to their daughter... inuyasha is remembering the memories... but at least he's not alone he has his son and daughter... i guess even mated to inuyasha kagome still died... really liked it... good job... great work...
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