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| "The Mystery Within" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 00:31 CST
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I sure hope I don't actually have to tell you how much I love this story, not by now. I'm very excited Gohan's now around. You know how much I love him and Goten. ^_^ I love how Niko played with Goten. I probably would have tickled him too! I can't wait to find out more about Niko's past. I've been wondering about it for so long...You have to hurry so I can find out! Well, you know we reviewers love you too. *huggles* Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 01:27 CDT
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Hm...This looks oddly familiar ~_^ You know I love it tons. I feel so sorry for Niko. I'm glad she finally found someone, and Piccolo too. Well, as always, I can't wait until you update. Have fun rewriting this monster, and don't worry, you'll do just fine. I'm sure you didn't need to hear that from me, but I thought it might help you in the motivation department. Thanks for the update! Until next time, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 19:39 CDT
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Well, I finally got around to reading this and I'm glad you kept riding me about it because it was definitely worth the time. Are there sparks flying? I think so. I can't wait to hear about Niko's past. What has her life been like? Putting up a cliffhanger was so mean! You'll hear all about it from me later. You know you can't escape! Well, I can't wait for an update, in fact, I'm going to add you to my favorites as soon as I finish this review! Oh, I wanted to mention that the story had some really great descriptions especially concerning Piccolo. I could see everything and you had him so in character. You really do love him! Well, I guess that's all for now. I'll tell you anything I forgot when we chat later. Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Kasei Tomodatchi On: July 02, 2002 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorHey! I've already read your fic(and I still think it's great by the way) but you are right!! This is SOOOO much better than FFN!!!! I signed up to! If you're easily amused, then what does that make me? ^_^ I love this! Thanx for sharing you fic, and your discovery of this new site!!!! |
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