Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story. You have a few errors in grammer and spelling but you keep the reader hooker with the action and suspence. I think you need to explain or show whats going on not tell but i love your story. Please continue as soon as you can.
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