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Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: February 26, 2011 16:56 EST
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Another good chapter! I really continue to enjoy how you've worked the characters into the plot, and kept true to their personalities! Also Orihime continues to be strong and sweet in your writing. |
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 09:58 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been greatly enjoying this series of stories. I like that you've given 'hime some 'backbone.' I also like the way you portray just about everyone - especially Chad and the Hollow. This last chapter actually made me feel quite a bit of sympathy for the Hollow. He's been locked up for so very long, it is no wonder that he's just a little insane and mad. Add to that the fact that he's all the negative emotions and hidden worries that Ichigo has hidden inside himself for so long...poor Hollow. Now he's been stabbed! I look very much forward to reading future chapters of this story. Thanks for writing for us! |
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 02, 2011 11:18 EST
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Chapter 13 - You muse completely cracked me up with the visual of Chad holding Ichigo upside down from his ankles to try to wake him up. I'm rather enjoying this story over all. Thanks for writing for us. |
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I LOVE the way you write Byakuya. I can hear his voice perfectly in my head reading your dialogue. He seems to have the uncanny knack of showing up like the 'spanish inquisition' at the PRECISE moment.... I love how you write him as a protective big brother. It's very sweet and endearing, though I'm sure it's ANNOYING to Rukia and Renji. But it's perfect in keeping with Byakuya's attitude towards her in this period in the anime. Rukia's attempt to keep decorum was also something that made sense. Poor Renji!!! Guy can't catch a break can he? Also I like how you're handling Orihime's capture and subsequent 'caging' by the conundrums that Aizen saddles her with. I really feel her torment here very clearly. Excellent update. Well worth waiting for.
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Title: Ichigo's definately frustrated
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You effectively conveyed how frustrated Ichigo was. I feel for the poor guy. Nobody seems to want to help him and he's about ready to tear his hair out. This plot's doing a great job incorporating the events of cannon with your own storyline. Before I started reading this fic I wasn't up to the Vizards or the Arrancar or Hueco mundo. Now that I'm caught up I'm still impressed with how you're handling all these plot threads. I really see how much Orihime means to Ichigo, and it's clear in how you've written his dialogue. He's really growing up in the fic. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Excellent work.
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: May 21, 2009 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again I really enjoy the way you wrote the romance. Ichigo's battle with his inner hollow is well represented. You also show Orihime's doubt very well. Rukia and Renji's interaction was perfect. The arguing and then him trying to kiss her in chapter 8 was very entertaining. I also loved how he tripped when he was getting down on one knee. Byakuya was also nicely written. I like the chemistry between him and Rukia. You can really tell he is protective of her, and yet does so through his desire to do what is right and proper. Also Renji's devotion to that code of honor makes sense with how they're all portrayed in the show. It's very consistent with Renji and Byakuya's actions in cannon. Great work.
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Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 21:41 EST
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update now I am tired of waiting. Come on and finish it unless you want what I promised for you. Jk but seriously though update or you will be asking for trouble. I can be a prick
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Title: Seto Takahashi
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 15:18 EST
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Ay update or I will find you. No bull I have telepathic powers and I can trace where you live. If you don't update I will use them to find you in your sleep and introduce myself carrying a chainsaw. YOU WANT THAT?
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Title: Seto Takahashi
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 20:34 EST
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I am on a mission to personally threat anyone who doesn't want to finish a master piece they started. ITS BULL SHIT!!!!!!! Why do this to us?
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Reviewed By: Seto Takahashi On: February 08, 2009 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated the fic this way because I like how the anime truly is incorperated in the story. Anyways please don't finish it off like this. I just have a feeling in my head that it is so that's why I am saying this. And also please update soon
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: JanzotheAshbringer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice way to stick to the storyline. Also nice in trying to keep the characters to their original selves. Orihime is stil Orihime and her weird sense of logic still remains. Ichigo seems a little too nervous but then again circumstances do dictate... As a personal favour please stop being so mean to Inoue. It really isn't fair that so many factors seem to be keeping her away from the man she loves. Anyway onto the other pieces of info. Though easily understandable your writing style is a little bit simplistic. Spelling and grammar are okay aside from the occasional error. And all in all I love the story. Keep writing... and keep expecting me to say that... apparently it's my catch phrase...
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 03:41 EDT
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now id say i love this pairing...theres just a huh, whats going on? at the end of the chap...i didnt understand it at first but i remembered the title....cant wait for the nxt one. ^-^ lol
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Reviewed By: 1snakecharmer4u [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:17 EDT
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Another good chapter pinned.Your Orihime is very in character.I can imagine her reacting the very same way.There is tension in this , a build up.You give me enough to keep me strung along.Good work.
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Reviewed By: 1snakecharmer4u [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 14:42 EST
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This is my favorite story on here,I am glad you decided to continue with this.I am a huge Ichihime fan and it's rare that I see stuff with them.Keep it up I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 04:57 EST
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chaps nice...hope there are others who will rev. your work...
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