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| "Reprisal" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Reprisal
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you made me cry for him too. Poor Malik. It was very creative and well done.
| Title: Refreshing
Reviewed By: mylittleunderground [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. You combined conventional Japanese living with bloodthirsty Yuugi-tachi revenge. I feel like I'm reading a doujinshi story (only without the pictures obviously). I'm also glad Jounouchi isn't totally evil. Instead, I'm glad you kept part of his true character. This story makes you kind of wonder about Malik too, because it makes you wonder if he really deserved it or not. In all, it was a very well written and refreshing story.
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