| "Naruto the Psychic Shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Way To Go
Reviewed By: avatoa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 02:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Now this is my kind of Naruto crossover. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hazlov2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are good
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Title: The Commentator
Reviewed By: BTVS On: February 12, 2008 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Great crossover between Pokemon and Naruto! Well done in terms of pokemon and Naruto characters interaction. Just the right mixture without descending into a Naruto/Pokemon fusion story. Best Naruto/Pokemon crossover!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting. Heh, and that was a pretty good approach on how to fight Itachi and Kisame, realistic for their fighting styles. Neh. Anyway, what's the deal with teh 5-tail fox? He Kyuubi's second in command or something? I expect you'll explain next chapter, so I look forward to it. Neh, update soon and all that, ja ne.
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Title: Its coming alone great
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. i like how you went on a different tangent and didn't make them all super powerful, it goes well with your story. also very nice fight scene, it was very detailed. this is turning to be a very good fic and im going to stick with it. also liked Naruto's opinion of the leaf but it still irks me that he still thinks he has anything to prove to that village. besides that, this is turning out to be a very enjoyable story. also someone told you that haku was a boy. im assuming you already knew that and just changed that for the purpose of the story. i have no problems with that, it doesn't seem like you changed haku that much except for giving her the possibility of being with Naruto. Great chapter, update soon.
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Reviewed By: UzumakiSora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 02:17 CST
Comment/Review:
O.k. this is good and all but...haku is a boy. Oh and I think you should bring gaara into this too. little 8 year old gaara. How cute!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
COOL! Now if only they can not kill each other while training...Neh. Update again soon, this story is interesting afterall. So, update soon, ja ne.
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Title: Good...
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story, its very unique with the whole mewtwo thing. this is also very well written, there is no problems there. i really want to see how Naruto turns out to be after his training, i really hope you stick to what you said in the summary, "darker naruto" some people say that but then they don't make him out to be very dark. Also you've made Kyuubi very sadistic, i just hope you don't take that too far. well good story so far, i want to see where this goes.
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