| "Asclepius" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: future author On: February 15, 2008 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally decided to read your story and i must say, i'm glad i did. It's very good and different. very original. it seems like a lot of the stories now are becoming predictable with their plots.this story is refreshing. i can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully, you'll be able to update soon. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 16:50 CST
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haha whew u had me holding my breath there. i really enjoy this story and i can't wait to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HA i love Rin :P and im loving it ^^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 13:33 CST
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haha gotta love rin
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I... love... this fanfic!! The futuristic realm that you've set our beloved characters in is fantastically original and beautifully written. I love how you've created depth to the characters. I especially like the twist as how Kagome can 'sense' the reapers-- like she can the jewel or negative auras in the anime. I'm so excited to read about the adventures the Inu-cast shall experience. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 22:21 CST
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seems interesting so far. can't wait to read more.
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Title: Interesting Storyline...
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 16:15 CST
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Hi there, I have just started reading your story and I cannot help but be intrigued. There are a few grammatical errors, and I wasn't sure of the time placement in the second chapter ( no offense), however, considering you are brave enough to write a story, with an interesting twist, I can't say much. lol. Keep up the good work, and I hope to hear from you soon. Zetta
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:45 CST
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I like it! Great job. ^^ Can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite an intriguing story! I love the post-apocalyptic genre with the Inu-cast. The characters still have their original traits, but you've helped develop them to suit the AU. You wording is very illustrative-- I can imagine the scenes very vividly. I'm excited to read the next installment!
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 01:08 CST
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Alright, the sumary was intrigueing so I thought that i'd give the fic a shot, BUT I CAN'T READ IT! IT'S REALLY HARD TO READ THE FONT WHEN THERE IS NOT SPACE BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS, ESPECIALLY ON THE WEB. I word of constructive critism, your story will not get a lot of attention if it's too hard to read.
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