"A Mother Knows Best" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 01:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: carrying out the "plan" is going to be the hard part...
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Reviewed By: tgathena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 20:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ooh ooh ooh give me more looks hilarious so far update soon pweezey
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Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 16:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yep, like everyone else said before - that one's new. And a bit scary as well as highly amusing! Can't wait to read more of meddling!Mom!
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Title: Interesting... Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 03:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I agree with what NewYorkCityUtopia brought up. Don't forget to incorporate scenes in the future showing Souta and Jii-chan left to their own devices. Not that an author of your caliber would have ever fallen victim to such an oversight, I'm sure. I know you know what you're doing, and I'm looking forward to seeing the continuation of this story. It's certainly a rather unique idea; one I've never seen done before. Good job.
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 15:10 CST Comment/Review: This sounds like a great story! I can't wait for the rest. I love romantic comedies and this one looks to be very funny.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 22:01 CST Comment/Review: *chuckling* when 'fate' doesn't move fast enough, give it a little push. cute ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 19:34 CST Comment/Review: Oh I like. Hope to read more, if more is forthcoming.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 18:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: And I can't wait for the rest of this story. It's great so far.
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Title: lol Reviewed By: Kourinthehunter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 14:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: :snickers: cute and funny! I like it :) ahh, fate.
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Title: mmm Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 10:45 CST Comment/Review: It's new, different, bold and daring..... I like it!! can't wait to see what'll happen next!
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Reviewed By: NewYorkCityUtopia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 07:34 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Hey, wait a sec... what about Souta? This being said I'm looking forward to the rest of your story!
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