| "Innocent Illusions" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Advice
Reviewed By: diabolus rex regis On: October 25, 2009 07:30 CDT
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It doesn't matter if your busy or what not, if your going to have slow updates then post a warning. There are always going to be people reading it who have to wait a month, a year, for it otherwise and as you've most likely have noticed they my get angry. You choice to take or leave this tidbit, but, please consider it.
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Title: DUN DUN DUN
Reviewed By: Rocker@Heart On: July 30, 2009 21:46 CDT
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*cough**cough* UPDATE DAMNIT! that is all.
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Title: Waa! So Awsome! :D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 17, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, I had found it before and lost it :( Im really happy to have found it again and to have continued where I left off. I've never read a Naruto story quite like this and find each chapter to be immensly entertaining. I hope to see many new chapters, please continue this very awsome story! *bows*
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 22:35 CDT
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This chapter was great! I loved it! I can't wait for the next one. Each one just makes it even more harder for me to wait for when Sasuke finds out the truth! But the layout is just too good for me to get mad about it! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 23:03 CDT
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Please, please, i'm gonna die if you don't wright anouther chappy! omg! Dude, like i don't have a comp, so i missed the last four chapters so today was a fun day =D you make me happy!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 18:06 CDT
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Well, well, isn't this something? LOL! Who would have thought that it would have come down to this. It just keeps getting better and better. You're doing a great job and I can't wait to see the actions for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 15:55 CDT
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It's ok. We all have other things to be working on. Like I should be working on a book review, but instead, I'm reviewing this! LOL! I love it though. I'm glad Naruto did punch Sasuke before he fell asleep. Don't know why, just am. I can't wait to see what happens next. And the look on Sasuke's face when he realizes that it actually is Naruto when he thought he was too good to be fooled. How will this turn out? I will be waiting for your next update!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 01:29 CDT
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Just finished chapter 10... OMG!!! I am so excited to see what you can bring into this right now!!! does sai get angry at naruto? does sakura find out about sasuke? do you really need to answer any of these questions? not really... just- update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 13:39 CDT
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Just when you think you got em' she leaves for a vacation. Poor Sasuke. LOL! Now Sai and Sakura are getting suspect about Naruto. I can't wait to see how these two plan to get information out of Naruto when they return from this mission.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 15:19 CDT
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I liked that you ended it like this. It makes you ready to read the next chapter. Like I already wasn't wanting to read it. I enjoyed the little talks between them. It is so entertaining. I can't wait to hear to good news when they tell Naruto and how he reacts towards it. I also look forward to their meeting next week.
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Reviewed By: nuriko316 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love where this is going. I'm delightfully intrigued. When Sasuke questioned Naruto (assuming she wanted romance)I was amused. The kiss was just great and explained well. I love the dialogue between Sasuke and Sobame. Sasuke reluctantly exploring what about Sobame draws him in and Naruto being oblivious for the longest time was/is great. I wonder what Sasuke's true intentions are? Hmmm...can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 19:28 CDT
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wow great story so far please update soon i love this story yay ^^ awsomeness lol
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Title: Great story!!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: March 02, 2008 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!!! i love what you've done with these characters!! its so fun to read about all the little problems that naruto has, and the fact that he still has them is just so enticing. Thank You for writing this, and please update soon!!! I NEED to know what happens.^.~
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*takes a deep breath and then releases* Wow...That was definately interesting! I enjoyed this a lot and I hope to see some more updates here soon! I really loved this story. Ja Matta, Revine
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 20:37 CST
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AH! The suspense! LOL! I really enjoyed that and look forward to the next one.
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