| "Innocent Illusions" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Great story!!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: March 02, 2008 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!!! i love what you've done with these characters!! its so fun to read about all the little problems that naruto has, and the fact that he still has them is just so enticing. Thank You for writing this, and please update soon!!! I NEED to know what happens.^.~
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*takes a deep breath and then releases* Wow...That was definately interesting! I enjoyed this a lot and I hope to see some more updates here soon! I really loved this story. Ja Matta, Revine
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 20:37 CST
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AH! The suspense! LOL! I really enjoyed that and look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaa! it ended too soon...you're a really good writer, please keep it up! i look forward to your next update! =D
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Title: TOTALY AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: Ala_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a good story. I look for updates everyday. I hope you write more it is very good.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 14:42 CST
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This is getting really good! The plot is so serious and just too tempting not to want to know more. Hope to see an update soon. The turn out of this will be rather interesting!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...omg...sasuke is so...cool yet evil? does that make sense? omg, you have to keep writing! i love it so much!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter and can't wait for an update. This is really exciting to read. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really, really good so far, me likey! kep updating peas and carrots?
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Reviewed By: nuriko316 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying this story. I find it to be different from what I've read so far, so its refreshing (to say the least). Even though you've taken 2 main characters out of their normal, usual atmosphere, you still managed to keep them 'in character' as if your story fits the Naruto world smoothly. I also like how you take your time in developing the bond between Naru and Sasu instead of rushing them into a relationship. Your original characters have great personalities that support your plot and Naruto well. I love the humor as well. I can't wait to see how this comes out!!
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Title: Honestly
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, that date almost had me in stitches! I love Naruto's reaction! He's all like "you wanna go!? Fight me bitch!!" lol. I'm a little sad Kyubbi(sp?) didn't Kill Sakura. But I'll live(I'm sorry, I just can't stand her) WRITE MORE PLEASE! ^^.Moving on to the 3rd chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...i;m sad that it ended! i've been trying to read it since you posted...stupid going to bed early, lol...great job! you've got sasuke's character dead on!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14(not logged in) On: February 06, 2008 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really, realllllllllly like this story! keep up the great work!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it! It's really Sasuke this time isn't it? I wonder why he came back? How long will it be before he figures out it's Naruto? I just love that fact that he has to play a girl! It's so funny. But is Kyuubi why he almost killed Sakura?
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 16:29 CST
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Hmmm, interesting. Worht reading more, SO UPDATE!!! Ja ne.
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