| "Nefarious" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: hikari hime 73 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's an interresting start!! The rythm is good and it makes me want to know what's next (and I'm quite a difficult reader in fact lol) What's happening to Kagome? Sesshomaru is not OOC, in fact it depends of the storyline really... so if you don't consider the manga, he is not OOC. ja ne
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Title: Egads!
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting story....I do hope you update soon. I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS UGHHHHHHH. . . :D Keep it up
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-speechless- ~sessh- do u want me 2 say omething? ~tba-..... ~sessh- i think she's still shocked. ~kags- nice work sherlock homes. ~sessh- who's this sherlok homes person? `kags- he's... nevermind-slaps hand on her forehead.- ~sessh-... ~tba-falls down- ~both-tower over her-r u ok? ~tba- rubbs temples-yea.. uh.. wat am i doing on the ground? ~sessh- step 1- memory loss. ~tba- seriously. wat happened. ~sessh-stage 2- bore dom. `tba-is ther aaaaaanny thing to do?????? ~sessh- stage 3- acceptance. or anger. one or the other. ~tba- did u guyz hit me?! ~kags-shiver diffintly anger! run!-runs- ~sessh-runs- ~tba-runs after them- ksg+sessh- update soon! bye!!!! -keeps running- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
ooh...hope you have lots of spare time. i wanna read more for sure!! FL
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