| "High School Can Get Better" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: why'd you stop??
Reviewed By: LokoRamenDaily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need more!!! you didnt abandon this fic did you?? if you did you an di need to have a serious talk >:( |
Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 08:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Uuughh....I wasn't going to post a review at first because certain things about this story just rubbed me the wrong way. First of all the title really doesn't fit the story, I know the first few chapters is a high school setting, but the story continues past high school. It is just confusing to me, how can high school get better if they are no longer in high school? Second what in the world was up with the time warp? I may be just jumping to conclusions on that part, but I can think of only one acceptable reason that someone who has just confessed their love for someone to disappear and not even try to contact them for five years. There were other things that bothered me in your story, but I can live with them, it makes the story more interesting. Even the title really doesn't matter it just has been nagging at the back of my brain as to why such a good story would have an ill fitting title, that is unless there is something you have planned in future chapters? Nevertheless the second reason is the most disturbing to me I can't seem to wrap my brain around it. I was just going to stop reading the story just because of that, but I just can't seem to stop thinking about the reason behind it. I really shouldn't get too worked up over a story, but there are two things that I really can't stand in stories and that is Kagome and Inuyasha getting paired with someone other than each other. The other is Miroku and Sango getting paired with someone other than each other. Even if it is only temporary, it really bugs me, although sometimes a really good story will come along and it will have this obstacle. I have only ever continued to read one story with a temporary Kouga and Kagome pairing. This will be the second, I really want to see how it ends up. Well I will finish my really weird rant by saying that if your story wasn't good you wouldn't have to be reading all of this. |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 23, 2011 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwww! Cliffhanger!! |
Title: HURRY AND RECIEW
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2011 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME! I really love this story. I wish you can hurry up and review because i really would love to know why inuyasha left and if kagome fell in love with him and what if what if what if....my god you really put me at the edge of my seat when inuyasha left. NOW you have to finish it. |
Reviewed By: Manda Panda On: April 23, 2011 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! I'm not a fan of the Inuyasha/Kikyo pairing though :( but I guess it's only fair since she did sleep with Kouga before.. bleh I still love this story :D I hope you keep updating it! |
Reviewed By: You need to write more On: April 22, 2011 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please please please please please pleaseplease pleas please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please |
Reviewed By: InuLuverLadyE On: April 21, 2011 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This amazing...and it takes a lot for me to comment on any story. Update soon...cause I cant wait to see the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: KiobitoSama86 On: April 21, 2011 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to rate you 10s for evrything.Loving it. |
Reviewed By: KiobitoSama86 On: April 21, 2011 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness you write fanfiction so well!!! Loved the chapters Loving the story,I can't wait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: LizuKrazy On: April 21, 2011 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really lile this story, you should keep writing. |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 20, 2011 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis story is amazing, I love the school setting!! I was surprised when kagome's boyfriend wasn't hojo, FINALLY. Please write again soon! |
Title: OOps...
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 21:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
I had just noticed the date on here. I sure hope it hasn't been left go to the wayside. It would truly be a shame. *crosses fingers* |
Title: \0/
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo... and they're off! :P I total love the way you write, and this already shows promise for a little Mayhem and Madness, ne?. Until next install, update when ya can! ;) |
Title: SoulSistersWriters@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the starting of this story. Its got great protental. Keep on writing this story. =) |
Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far.. I hope you continue to update.
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