| "Why me? Why now?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Wowee On: December 02, 2008 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Are you going to update soon? also cut back on Kurama's swearing. hes a verry polite person, an its makking him ooc.
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Reviewed By: KuramaBabe On: November 05, 2008 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am lovin' this fic so much! I really want to see more of it. Love the plot (especially with Kuronue and Inari) and you make the situation seem so real. And I agree with the other reviewer that you are great at showing emotion in your writing. I hope you update soon. A great story like this shouldn't be left unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Wolvesbane39 On: March 29, 2008 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, please update soon! This is still one of my personal favs.
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Reviewed By: Wolvesbane39 On: March 03, 2008 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love the story! Rg I've been reading it on fanfiction.com and check daily to see if its updated! I love it so much I've read it at least 8 times! PLEEEEAAAAAASSSE update soon! Your a great writer, I also await more for "How Could You Lie To Me?". Your quite talented, keep up the good work! Also that one person is right mix up the details a little more.I also write, but I specify in descriptive writing, and fantasy. Man talk about drama... I want to know more!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: zsfantasy On: February 23, 2008 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! You write emotions/thoughts very well. I love the spin on the mpreg story line, especially with Kurama worrying over Hiei's reaction. I hope that we will get to see more of Inari and Kurone, which by the way was a great twist in the plot line. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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