Reviewed By: Kitsune of Darkness (Saku) On: February 06, 2008 20:24 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: *laughs* Ah man this story was just awesome! "He peered up at the blond menace. "This is why I wear goggles." Perhaps he should also consider body armor and earplugs, at this rate." That part had me laughing so hard! I just love it and I ya should so write more. It'd be awesome to see if Mello finally wins or not. Cool story weither ya update or not!