| "Perspective" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sweet story. Cute perspective done by Myoga and Sesshomaru. It is believable though. Their story isn't very dramatic or romantic. They just met, fell in love and decided to do what they felt what "right" instead of what society dictated they should. Great example for their son to follow. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Plenty of poetic ambiguity to start. Oh but this fits Myouga's speech patterns well. Still, he was always more prone to euphemize and gloss things over than to make them up out of whole cloth. Ditto for Sesshou. His story about Inuyasha's mom seems farfetched, especially considering where she lived when Yash was a kid. Still, the tone and voice of all three characters is dead-on. I like it very much.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 06, 2008 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the sweetest story . . . I enjoyed every word. It seemed a different sort of storytelling. Simple, but intricate with feelings. I especially loved the ending! Hope to read you soon (again), Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How terrific :) I love the different impressions of the history based on the storyteller
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Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely believable - that's exactly how I imagine it could have happened.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 02:28 CST
Comment/Review:
the many sides of the truth... ~ a pleasure as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute! I love it.
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