| "The begining (for lack of a better tital)" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: astrakage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the meeting. I want to read about Hiei's and Kurama's reactions the most.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 10:40 CST
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i love this, please update soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 04:52 CDT
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this is a great story so far, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: lbf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Yume Koorime Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! whats the paring? UPDATE REAL SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoyed this! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Asharra On: February 08, 2008 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right now this is more of a tease than story. Lets see what the rest brings
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:25 CST
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I LOVE it. Update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:56 CST
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OMG this is going to be hilarious. Don't attack. I love that. Poor girl, she's too nice sometimes and she has no idea what she's getting herself into either. I look forward to the different groups meeting and why exactly isn't it safe for Kagome that she had to get an apartment away from her family? Is she being hunted? Are other demons looking for her? Does she still have the shikon with her and last but not least why is Sango with her? Sorry for asking so many questions but I guess these are the things that I look forward to learning no matter how long it takes for you to get to them. Sometiems the most fun is hiding all these answers in the story to be picked out as you go. Anyway I do look forward to the next chapter and good luck.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 02:20 CST
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A but rushed, but a great start! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next Chapter Please!! I'm waiting!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:30 CST
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i like it interesting way to bring kags in ive never thought of that before
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