| "Wish For The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 23:25 CST
Comment/Review:
You finally updated!!! Yea!!!!! *does a little dance* |
Reviewed By: Jbramx2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMIGOD! A CLIFFHANGER?! I HAVE SPENT FOUR DAYS READING THIS! and you leave me with a cliffhanger?! *groans* Come on finish this! It's excellent! Great story, I love this renewal of characters like Bardock and Radditz. I hate to say this, but this is really sweeet, a very touching and dramatic story. =^_^= Gosh! I can't wait till you finish writing this. BRING OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 13:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
the visions and dreams were intense and add to my anticipation of the future of this fic.
Good job writing Pilaf too. |
Reviewed By: karena On: October 03, 2002 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing and am very happy to have found you here. i looked for your stories on ffn and i got a "user does not exist". so i guess i'll look for you here. i really like the way your writing pilaf and crew, bumbling idiots as they should be, comedic relief. patiently waiting for any more chapters that you post of any of your stories, by the way. They're all good. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you going to post more chapters to this fic up here? I know its hard to find time to write fanfics when school starts but you havn't done anything to this story since the first of september and actually I wnat to know what happens... its one of my favorite fics. *sigh* (Yes, I know that sounds really cheezy but its true.)
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I should have reviewed every chapter but I was having too much fun reading them all. So now I have caught up to you and can't wait for ch. 61.
It is great, I love your Vegeta and your Bardock is good too. |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO !!!!
Figures that they would screw it up. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* I gave a responce before but I just have to again. This fic is just TOO funny! I cant wait for you to come out with the next chapter. It got good a long time ago (around the 1st chapter or so, lol) and just keeps on getting better.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 12:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww when will you write more |
Reviewed By: dbz fan On: August 14, 2002 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great can't wait to read more |
Reviewed By: Sailor Earth On: July 25, 2002 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is good! I really like it!! |
Reviewed By: Yume On: July 24, 2002 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is the best fic ever!! The only problem I have with it is that it is taking to long to upload. But other than that it is great!! |
Reviewed By: Baka On: July 22, 2002 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a really good FanFic. I can't wait for the other chapters to come out. I LOVED this Fic!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!! |
Reviewed By: MintlytheBADgoddess On: July 18, 2002 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Brenda-chan on mm.org. I've always loved this site, but not for the fanfics. The fanart ^^. I can't wait until you catch up in recent chapters. |
Reviewed By: goodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgoodandgoodisgo On: July 24, 2002 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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