| "Wish For The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Burenda! *waves* It's H4L! (At least on ff.net, here it's H4E.) I just had to read this, and I was totally blown away. It sort of reminds me of Lady Moonlight's "Trunks and Goten's Bogus Adventure" series she has going. Both of your stories are very similar, yet different. I like the differences! Good job, and hurry up and upload the remaining chapters, would ya? |
Reviewed By: Burenda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 05:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know about the OOCness. For the chibis, it's easy to explain, since they're just chibis (e.g. no one REALLY knows Vegeta's personality as a child). With Bardock, though... *sighs* I hadn't seen the Bardock special when I wrote this (still haven't ARGH!) and I'm kinda sad to say that I did the worst job on his character, in my opinion. At least so far as keeping in In Character. *sighs* Oh well. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bwahahahah!! Thats just plain awsome. You use some great forshadowing in the story and although some of the charactors seem to be just a bit (a very little bit) OOC you seem to stay with thier basic personalities very well. Great job. I cant wait for the rest to be written/uploaded.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Darkfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will never tire of reading that chapter! Jello!
*giggle* |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved this fic ever since I started reading it way back and fanfiction.net. Too bad the stupid thing had to go down....anyway...this is a great fanfic, so get the new stuff up really quickly!! |
Reviewed By: Gabriel On: July 08, 2002 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how many chapters are there and how will you be updateing
plz e-mail me at blue_pyro@hotmail.com thx
im not that good @ describing how i liked the story so ill
hope that the rating is enough |
Reviewed By: Tapion Trunks On: July 07, 2002 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you haven't changed the story much Brenda. A few authors notes but other than that i don't see much difference.
Hope FF.Net is up soon. Anyway, just for the record, great story! |
Reviewed By: Panthera tigris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a great story I can't wait to see the next chapiter!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sadie On: July 05, 2002 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good! Please hurry and update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! ;) |
Reviewed By: Ed On: July 05, 2002 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh!! You've all converted!!!
Guess we all need a temp, huh? Looking forward to the new chapters! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
that telemarketer thing was too good :D and poor Trunks you had to go and be mean to the cuty :( oh well:D
i really like this story,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Frozenflower On: July 03, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so you're here too, huh? I think I might just have to start uploading my stuff here...uh, now? I mean, what am I going to do for the next two weeks otherwise? Look for a job? PERISH THE THOUGHT! Great first chapter, you know I love this fic, can't wait for the continuation! |
Reviewed By: Darkfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you got onto this site! I hope you can upload everything quickly so I don't have to wait too long for Ch.59. |
Reviewed By: Triss On: July 03, 2002 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice first chapter. I like how Goten thinks something went wrong with his wish, but it really didn't. I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter. Please get it out soon. |
Reviewed By: Maxine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT!!! You're posting here! Of course, seeing as how there's about, hmm, FIFTY chapters, I guess I won't be reading anything new for a while. *sigh* But that's ok! At least I know you'll be here whenever FF.N's down. That's the main reason I got an account here too. ^__^ Well, I'll be waiting for the new stuff! |
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