| "Wish For The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:25 CDT
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Title: it drives me nutz to see the really good storieslike this unfinished...
Reviewed By: ladyvaltaya On: May 04, 2004 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, and I know you are probably as busy as I am, but I am DYING to see how this story ends. LOL if you see this, please know that I mean every word of it. ^_~ Yes it's really me... damn media miner won't let me do any signed reviews today for some reason.... grrr
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Reviewed By: giggles101988 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first, everyone does something like this and I think that it's just stupid, but if you like it, go ahead and write it, I'm not judging you. Also, Raisu is not a play off rice. I know, I speak Japanese fluently. Gohan means rice. All in all I like this story, but you seriously need a life if you can type up 68 chapters. LOL. If you'd like, yo can read the story that I have up. Mediaminer messed it up. I'm under trunksgirl0123. My friend named me that because I'm "obsessed" with Trunks and Vegeta. I hope that you don't take anthing personally. I only wanted to correct your error in Japanese. Thanx for reading.
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Reviewed By: fghd On: March 27, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think Bardock was a little OOC. he was kind of...um...touchy feely...but its a good story keep on writing!
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Title: Poor Vegeta
Reviewed By: This is Lady Valtaya... just too lazy to log in On: March 23, 2004 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He just doesn't understand that his father was proud of him all the time... That the formality of his station usually meant he had to have some reason to give him to say it. The characterizations and your style are only getting better! Keep it up!!!!!!!!! up!
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Reviewed By: hatemaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:25 CST
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i think this is one of the best fan fic,s i have ever read although i have one request super saiyan raditz and bardock they would rule get rid of normal saiyan *picks up sycthe and slices a picture of normal raditz and bardock*
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Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 23:47 CST
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Are you still writing this story and if so are you posting it on media miner? If not can you give me the address of where I can find it. I love the plot and your writing is awsome. i really hope you havn't decided to just... stop... |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 23:25 CST
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You finally updated!!! Yea!!!!! *does a little dance* |
Reviewed By: Jbramx2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMIGOD! A CLIFFHANGER?! I HAVE SPENT FOUR DAYS READING THIS! and you leave me with a cliffhanger?! *groans* Come on finish this! It's excellent! Great story, I love this renewal of characters like Bardock and Radditz. I hate to say this, but this is really sweeet, a very touching and dramatic story. =^_^= Gosh! I can't wait till you finish writing this. BRING OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 13:25 CDT
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the visions and dreams were intense and add to my anticipation of the future of this fic.
Good job writing Pilaf too. |
Reviewed By: karena On: October 03, 2002 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing and am very happy to have found you here. i looked for your stories on ffn and i got a "user does not exist". so i guess i'll look for you here. i really like the way your writing pilaf and crew, bumbling idiots as they should be, comedic relief. patiently waiting for any more chapters that you post of any of your stories, by the way. They're all good. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 22:32 CDT
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Are you going to post more chapters to this fic up here? I know its hard to find time to write fanfics when school starts but you havn't done anything to this story since the first of september and actually I wnat to know what happens... its one of my favorite fics. *sigh* (Yes, I know that sounds really cheezy but its true.)
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I should have reviewed every chapter but I was having too much fun reading them all. So now I have caught up to you and can't wait for ch. 61.
It is great, I love your Vegeta and your Bardock is good too. |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 17:45 CDT
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LMAO !!!!
Figures that they would screw it up. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* I gave a responce before but I just have to again. This fic is just TOO funny! I cant wait for you to come out with the next chapter. It got good a long time ago (around the 1st chapter or so, lol) and just keeps on getting better.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
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