| "Of Snowstorms and annoying old women." Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 12:26 CDT
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okay you are being mean, talk about leaving a cliffy. kagome is going to be in deep trouble when sesshomaru regains his memory back. and i can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to them possibly being mates by the end of winter. although i like it that kagome returned sesshomaru's arm. waiting patience for another chapter. this story is really starting to get really good. update soon.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 10:02 CDT
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oooohhh....kagome's is sooooo gonna get it when sesshomaru "wakes up" per say. lol. this is turning out to be very good. you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter each time!! FL
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Reviewed By: Zeos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful addition to the story! I really look forward to seeing what you write next. I enjoy it all, Great work!
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for the update. I am so glad they're becoming much closer. I just wish she would give in to her feelings for him more and take a chance. It would be better to have had him for a little while than not at all. Regret and no memories make for a cold, lonely existence. I speak from experience and the years to prove it. This Snowbird says give her her memories so if he abandons her, she will at least have that. One more thing, please give him his arm back. In my mind I always picture him with both arms. That part of the anime I hate.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 09:34 CDT
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awww...sweet. that's one of my favorite positions to put them in, lol. very good. i can't wait for the next chap. FL
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 03:26 CDT
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i love how they are trapped for the winter and sesshomaru is determined to win kagome. i feel bad for Talia though, being all alone, although i think she enjoys playing matchmaker between sess and kagome. interesting plot. update soon. you are off to an excellent start. i want to know how he is going to prove that he is kagomes mate to be and how he is going to get past the wall she has erected around her feelings. i look forward to your next chapter or two.
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, when are you going to update? It's been two months. This is such a cute and fascinating story. I like the plot. It's different. I wouldn't mind being snowbound with him.
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Title: Of Snowstorms And Annoying Old Woman.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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good chapter
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really, really, really love this! You're amazing, despite a few errors. The main one I noticed is that you said Rin's parents/family was killed by wolves; they were actually killed by bandits and Rin was living alone in a rundown hut near a village when she was attacked and killed by Kouga's wolves. Despite that, I love you! I was so disappointed when I realized there wasn't another chapter. I love the way you made Kagome's and especially Sesshoumaru's character; they fit exactly into the situation. You are GOD! Hurry up with the next chapter ;P Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 15:30 CST
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This is good. I like it, despite the fact that I typically don't like SessxKag fanfics in which one of them loses his/her memory. I like how you still keep him in character, even though he has amnesia. Good job, and I hope you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Zeos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You have so much potential!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:12 CST
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aww, this is cute. i want more plz! lol FL
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work! love this story
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 01:43 CST
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Wow I really like how this is taking shape. Great work!
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