Title: Soooo Cute
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first off, i really like this story, its so cute. now you have some major grammar problems, its weird but not so bad that i cant read it. like you dont put quotation makes when someone talks and other things but i really like this so i can excuses it. i love how frail Sasuke is, he is so cute that way, just don't make this angsty. i can see how this mission could lead to some angst i hope it doesnt, i hate angst but its your story. again, love how submissive sasuke is, you could totally do a mpreg as long as sasuke gets pregnant but thats obvious. well nice story, it has major grammar problems but i guess thats your style. keep up the chapters. oh and i need more lemon scenes please.
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