| "Born Of The Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Stargurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I feel bad giving you all these high ratings but I liked this chapter too! I loved The "other world" sequence and how it was written. I also liked the lesbians and Yuhan being facinated with them! LOL I got a kick out of that! |
Reviewed By: Stargurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I liked this chapter! Especially the dream sequence! Wow I just can't get over that! I got chills reallly! I love the shattering mirror. Yay! It's starting to pick up speed! |
Reviewed By: Stargurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice "filler" sort of chapter. It gave me details of Hitomi's life and relationships. There were a few typos though. Oh well C'est La vie or something like that you know my french is bad. I told you I would review! ~Ali |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll come back for more |
Reviewed By: Stargurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finnally! what seems to be a switch from your typical Esca continuation fic! A hard kinda fic to find! I thought it was a really nice 1st person of an older hitomi, the ending of the chapter will have me comming back for more I assure you! A nice solid start! Damn where's my media miner name when I need it? |
