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"Fully Alive" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2009 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
it was way to short i want this story to continue it feels like its missing something since it ended so quick. please continue.
 Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2008 07:19 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
well, I like it! 9 for being too short.
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 08, 2008 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Neh, not the best start (Naruto's explanation about her past is a bit run-on, but comes iwth the territory of a 5 year old, also take into account, he's japanese, he's bound to mispronounce at least some words). Anyway, the idea has been done, but whatever, nght.

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