| "Naruto:" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Needs Work
Reviewed By: The Black Miroku On: October 09, 2008 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hard to read since everything is bunched up, if you space the sentences out it will be easier to read and comment on, that's the reason I gave you a 1 in writing and grammer.
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i don't know were you came up with the idea for this story but it rocks. The way you tell it is so original that i think you might the next great manga writer. Keep doing what ever it is your doing to get your insperation.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
umm......y are chap one and two the same?
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Reviewed By: Foxy100 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey you repeated chapt 1 for chapt 2
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: February 18, 2008 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok You may want to work on condensing your summary. I don't know about other readers but I only read a story if it has a summary that catches my interest. But yours is way too long to bother reading, it's practicly a chapter!! So try condensing it maybe to like a paragraph.
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Reviewed By: I Come Anon(ymously) On: February 18, 2008 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
It seems that you've uploaded your second chapter into both the chapter 1 and 2 slots, and if I'm not mistaken... pasted the first chapter into the story description/summary field.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic! update soon!!
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