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| "Pink Shirt" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was so funny! :) I'd be interested to see that alternate ending, too. The whole thing was just so...clever. I wish there were more stories like this. With lots of random silliness, and yet still managing to keep people in character as much as possible. You did a good job with that too, by the way. Considering the circumstances, I don't think you butchered them too terribly. Well...not hatefully so. :D
| Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Vegeta's Mate and Lover for Life, Veggie_Luva_101
| Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 16:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey don't put yourself down, it wasn't dreadful, it made me laugh. Shame to leave it there though as I wanted to read some of the things Vegeta made Goku do.
| Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonder what was in the fine print? I love a sneaky Vegeta.
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