| "In Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 07:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this sounds like a good story, i hope you update it soon.
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Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is really a good story i thoroughly enjoyed it
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Title: very good, love it
Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is really a good story, when you update or complete it please, please, please let me be the first it is really a good story.
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 01:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more soon :) I'm leaving for a private college in a month and I have to use their internet but their internet has a filter on it to make sure we're doing purely academic internet surfing. PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, please!!
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Title: *pouts* Not the first review on the repost
Reviewed By: CMK2CMM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What I said last time: Loved the way you did the dream. Never seen one done quite like that and it gave it a kind of (forgive my poor vocabulary at the moment) dream-like quality. (Yeah, see? I couldn't think of the right word for the life of me) I liked the way you described Inuyasha witnessing the dream too. All in all it's a wonderful chapter, especially for the first chapter in your first story! If you need someone to proofread for you, I'd be happy to. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I'm sure the rest will be just as impressive as this. Now I can say I'm your fan! Christina Sunset Miko What I say this time: Still impressed, and now that I know what happens in 2 I can't wait to see 3! Gotta love previews!
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 03:58 CST
Comment/Review:
seem good
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm...sounds like 'sins in dreaming' which is a very good story so far. yours is cute. can't wait to read more. FL
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