| "Intoxication" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
For never being drunk you wrote it just fine. Their were few if any spelling errors. This story was good i like that the only thing she remembered was him buying her a chappy doll. This was a very good story and I hope you keep up the good work. ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: randall On: October 12, 2008 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
FOe some one who says that they have never been drunk you do a pretty good job of writing it. So a over all good and slightly light one shot
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was very cute! And don't worry, it was OOC in a good way! (= ]
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:16 CST
Comment/Review:
a drunken rukia, of course she will give poor ichigo a hard time. and ichigo's reactions while changing her was really funny, yet true to his character. even when he was pissed at her, he couldn't let her just go and leave her. he had to look after her and care for her. that is really so sweet.
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Title: Pleasing
Reviewed By: Kojiyuko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You story was pleasing to read and a nice change of pace. It was funny and you should keep writing.
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