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| "OLD vs. NEW" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Tamed Wolf.--WHOOT!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons (NLI) On: February 19, 2008 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOURVE Kenpachi! KENNY!!!!!!!!!!! I am so in love with this poem! You've gotten his personality down to a science! Unfortunately, I'm limited to Cartoon Network for Bleach episodes, so I've never seen the more bloodthritsty aspect of little Miss pink...tee hee! But, I want to see more episodes, now! It's like you summarized the best fight scenes from Kenny for us all...and his off the wall personality. I really liked the revisions--mainly the 3rd one! Great one!
| Title: YAY a fan
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
THanks iloveanimecartoons i'm really glad you like it. i'm glad you didn't get lost in reading my poem. people say that they never understand it or that its weird. so its always good to hear that one person gets it. thanks you really, your comment means a lot.
| Title: Okay, After Eenie Meenie Minie Moe, I picked #2 to R&R.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I read it and paused. Then I went back to the Collection Summary and reread it--you wrote: my writting comes from my emotions. Then I reread it, the poem. Okay, this is what I got out of it. You writing, to me, is very personal and not unlike an open book. For those bold or dare I say brave enough to allow others into their world and occurances, their hopes, dreams, fears, frustrations and lessons learned, I salute them. I reread this poem comparison twice (not because I was confused or in any way lost--it reads very straight forward, metaphors included) and a picture opened up before my eyes so that I wasn't thinking in anymore in terms of words to comprehension...i just SAW it. The struggle, the lonliness, the anguish and solitude and I nearly wanted to hug you. You said you write from your emotions which made me automatically wonder if this was inspired by actual fact or emotions that triggered poetry of a similar vein. Either way, you've got your first MM.org fan and I look forward to more of you works to come! It was hard to say which I like better. I saw, outside of maybe a little spell checking, keep 'em both! They both read beautifully to me! Good luck in your future writing! Oh, Happy V Day!
| Title: that weird writting
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 01:02 CST
Comment/Review:
&n bsp; i notice that some how that was added and just wanted to let you know that it means nothing. so i'm sorry about that
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