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| "The Vampire Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Must Write More
Reviewed By: UsTheUsers On: July 28, 2009 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was amazing! ^^ I'm completely dying to see what happeneds, and it is killing me that you don't have a second chapter. >.<
I have to say I absolutely love original stories on this website because of the creativity and you can NEVER be OOC because you make your chars who they are. :P I love Gage already and I haven't even learned much about him yet. I hope that even if its just this one comment that inspires you. I really hope you write another chapter. More that any other original story I've read. Maybe I'm being a bit dramatic but seriously... I'll... I'll cry if you don't write more. I seriously bugged my sister for 3 hours begging her to let me read your story. xD Pretty pretty pleassee!!! Wow @ me begging.. Just... please. And thank you. ^^ Good luck.
| Title: Intriged
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 05, 2008 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've stirred my curiosity. Your better than some writers I've seen (and belive me i've seen so HORRABLE writers, though im not trying to be mean) the point im getting at is, you've got some talent and I actually want to see how the story turns out. I dont like it when people skip a story just because its not fanfiction but just origonal work and I belive this discourages alot of people from making origonal stories. But on that note, I did enjoy myself and look forward to future chapters :D
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