| "Sun Burn" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Zworld2 On: December 06, 2011 06:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome! (Well, I read the re-written one) Was so very good :3 I love GH/V fanfics! The ending was quite funny... I could just imagine their expressions :P |
Reviewed By: Videl Son On: March 16, 2008 16:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, write more Gh/Vi and not alternate pairings shit. Do you have the link to the doujinshi? And is it safe? I don't want nmy computer to gte a virus.
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Reviewed By: Keryn On: March 16, 2008 16:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
Write more GhVi, dude. Alternate pairings suck!
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Reviewed By: ILANA On: March 06, 2008 14:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Yep, I agree with G/V lover. Alternate pairings suck and so do you if you like them. Just write about G/V
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Reviewed By: GV LOVER On: March 06, 2008 14:57 EST
Comment/Review:
It was okay. Several spelling mistakes but I'm glad that it was a G/V. You say you like to please your readers? Then I'm going to get all my G/V loving friends to review and tell you that they TOO think that you should focus on the and stop this G/OC shit. Deal? I promise you that they will outnumber those fools who might inexplicably adhere to this. You have to accept otherwise you would be negating the whole reason as to WHY you write. I'm up for the challenge. I refus eto go near any shitty G/OC fics but I'll get them to post there and here. Don't be surprised if some of them are angry at these alternate pairings you seem to love writing about.
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Reviewed By: Eden's Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 10:40 EST
Comment/Review:
It was better than most. I really, really think that you should focus on Gh/Vi; they're the best. Write more but don't keep exploring themes you have already written in your fics (I refuse to read G/OC). Als, ERASA IS NOT "AS" HOT AS VIDEL!!! Not even close! That is ludicrous to say!
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