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Reviewed By: Vickey On: February 16, 2008 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I could see you doing more with it. Poor Kagome. I like the title, everything. It flows, it's different. Has character. Kudos to you!! I'll be looking for more of your work.
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Reviewed By: FullMetalChick1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great!!! I think you should continue it!!!
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 04:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Have you considered a sequel? It has to much potential of being just a one shot. I would like to see how the characters change/grow with time. Sesshoumaru didn´t get stronger just by mating, his father must have meant something else like actually caring for his mate. You see, I´m hungry for more.
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