| "Child of Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: LadyLuckRogue On: May 26, 2013 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these kinds of stories that take place in Vegeta's mysterious past. I find it interesting and highly possible that he had at least a fling or two with other girls when he was younger. I like the fact that Temy wasnt necessarily killed off in this either. It's open ended. The story itself has that dark twisted gritty feel to it that at least I would expect from Vegeta's past. Very well done. |
Title: nice!
Reviewed By: GreyFox23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think its pretty interesting so far write more por favor ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh... I wonder what's going to happen next *giggles*.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh no what is wrong with Vegita that the tank couldn't fix? I sort of like how protective Nappa is and I think both Nappa and Raditz are very much in character.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:28 EST
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That was very hot... I can feel both their frustrations, and their passion. Liked the scene in the shower =)
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:06 EST
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I think I like Temy... she's rough and rude but rather interesting. I also like your Vegita, impatient, revelious, proud. Not the typical teenager but somehow still one. Can't wait to find out where Temy is going...
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