| "Questionable Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Lina On: October 04, 2002 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the start of this story! I want to hear more. on grammer, try reading your sentences aloud... this will help prevent your run on sentences and wrong word placements... look foreward to more. |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah u wrote another one keep em comin |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 20:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz keep writing I think its a pretty good story |
Reviewed By: sphinx_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm...strange. They have the same dreams...it's an okay story. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This kind of story is new...but hey for your first fic it is pretty good. |
