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| "The Naruto Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: KyuubiPerry On: February 24, 2010 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you do one with tayuya from the sound 5
| Reviewed By: Kyuubis-child On: May 19, 2009 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. Please update soon. I have some suggestions for some girls/women that Naruto could be paired with in the future. Tsume Inuzuka Hana Inuzuka Mikoto Uchiha Isaaribi Sasame Fuma Shizune Tsunami from the Wave Arc
| Title: fucking awesome
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this wuz fucking awesome i hope u add 2 this cuz i'd lik 2 see a naru/ino in this i loved each chaoter no complants what so ever and i reli wouldn't b surprised if shizune turned out lez ok hope u add 2 this cuz i reli liked this fic Boom Shakalka Churna, Desgardia
| Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: tiberiosity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is actually really good. I hope that you start writing it again.
| Reviewed By: Sean_moses On: March 01, 2008 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I read it all today, amazing, I want more, I can't wait for kyuubi no kitsune Evil...That should be interesting..Gonna add in hinata? OH MAKE OC jinchirriki and have him meet with them too..I am a genius
| Reviewed By: wiwuno [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 18:42 CST
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this is an amazing read and i went to your ff acount and cant find battle for the shikon where else can i find it?
| Reviewed By: Kyuubi Naruto No Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is Interesting stuff, I can see how all this stuff COULD be real. And I have Four girls you could put in, Isaribi the girl from Land of the Sea Arc, Hokuto one of the Star Village Ninja, Sasame Fuma from the Infiltrating Orochimaru's Lair arc, and Yakumo Kurama from the Kurama Clan Arc.
| Reviewed By: ScicoJin On: February 21, 2008 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo it's kinda weird I have been reading this on AFF.net. Yet I am reviewing it on Media miner, at least that is weird to me. Anyway the first three chapters I really didn't have any trouble getting into. The plots for them were fairly believable. Though I was a tad upset that Naruto died in chapter two. As well as Sakura dieing in chapter three also left me with a twinge of sadness. Yes I felt bad when Karin slit her throat, so what. Chapter four was a challenge for me seeing as I don't like changing clearly male characters into female characters and vice versa. I got through it but it wasn't easy. Since the only way I could picture miko was to think of Tatsuki from Bleach or Saya from Blood +. Chapter five was slightly less solid then the previous chapters. For one I don't think it would be that easy to make even a former member of a secret organization of S-class Nuke-Nins a Shinobi for any hidden village. There has to be some kind of resistance to give gravity to the situation. In my opinion I think you kinda rushed to the sex on this one instead of building up the relationship between Konan and Naruto. I really wish that woman was named something else. Well I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter which should be either be Nibi or Kushina. It shall be good either way, but just remember not all relationships are the same. I realize that I'm getting a bit mushy over this so I will signing off. This has been a message from the local Nutcase, Scico-Jin.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 14:38 CST
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Hmmm, I dislike chapter 5 because I think it would be unrealistic, Konan would dislike anyone related to Minato, because he took Jiraiya away from them, and he thought they were dead. And seriously, even if her loyalties were personal, I doubt she'd go over to Konoha, she'd probably escape on her own if Pein was defeated. Neh. I do dislike the concept of chapter 5, it is unrealistic. But to be honest, I do think you got the sex relationship she has with Pein to be fairly accurate, he would be terrible in bed, with so much on his mind. Plus, I think Konan is a very cold person. But, that's my opinion. Neh. It's a little sad no one else on Mediaminer has reviewed this fic (then again, this site is less popular these days, heh) but I guess that's fine. Anyway, keep writing, and sometime write up these stories into full fics, will ya? It is a good idea, and one that hopefully, people will read out for. neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 15:02 CST
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Oh man, that was rich, definitely awesome chapter 4. Neh. I liked all the concepts (chapter 2, with Haku was a bit sad, but sometimes it happens, ninja's are the common soldier level assassins, so not much of a survival rate, really). Neh. ANyway, get around to writing at least chapter one, that concept was cool. Neh, update soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 23:23 CST
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THIS IS THE A SHOWING OF SUPREEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMME YYYYYYOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Lol, this is awesome. Decent sex scenes, funny stuff, and a really cool ending, it makes for a good early and end of a fic. So, with some work, it could become a full one, or just remain as a really cool stand-alone one. Neh. Keep writing, this one was fun, okay? Ja ne.
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