Title: Here it is...
Reviewed By: TRuE BLuE SkY [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally, I get to see the beginnng of it! Prologues are usually slow and uneventful, but you did a very good job of following the anime/manga plot. One thing that irks me a tiny bit, however, it the way the dialog is written. I was never fond of their accents in the dub (I found Jaeger's dub voice painful), and reading it somewhat reminds me of that painful voice. However, it's nothing that needs to be radically changed, I can't write German accents to save my life. (You may have noticed this in old fics I've written) Here's to the second chapter!
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