| "You know you love me" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 17:26 CDT
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Hey guy's!Chapter 8 is up. It just has what happened after school.But I hope yall enjoy it! Peace Homies, HanyouGurl
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Title: suggestion 4 the mascot
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. AND I THINK THE SHIKION MASCOT SHOULD BE.. UM... ~inu- a dog! ~kags- a bird? ~Ayame- a priestress! ~sango- a demon? ~sessh- hmm.... ~miroku- a devishly handsome monk. ~sango- slaps miroku- how about a flatted monk? ~tba- *freked out laugh- heh.. heh.. heh.... i agree with the priestress thing. the shinkion jewel came out of a priestress. but really ayame. do u wanna be in a priestress costume? ~ayame- ohhh! lets dress up kagome to look like midokuren! ~kags- uh.. dont i have a say in this? ~sessh- lets see.... no. ~kag- ... (-_-) oh gee. thanks 4 the consideration. ~sessh- my pleasure. ~kag- there's no mercy here. wat are u guys gonna do to me? ~inu- level 2? ~tba- level 4! ~sess- level 3 ~ayame- level 4! ~miroku- level 25 ~sango - level 4. ~tba level 4 it is! a TICKLE FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~kags- gasp- oh no.. ~all- starts tickling kags-mwahahahahahahahaha! ~kags- starts laughing&tears in eyes from laughter* s.. st... oop... p... pl.. ease.. st... ooop. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cracks up* ~sessh-confused* i... have.. a ... date? ~rin- IM GONNA KILL AYAME 4 THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~kagome- atleast u have a date with ur crush! ~sessh-... crush? ~rin- DEEP BLUSH-uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. *runs off* ~sessh- wait! come back! *runs after her* ~inu- wanna see the house? ~kags- uh... sure. ~both- leave- ~tba-... oh damn it. now im alone. well. update soon. oh! and make a chapter about sessh& rin's date! better yet. *evil laugh* kags could spy on them. Rin would probably have a cow when she hears that she has a date. ~rin- WHAT! ~sesh- pant* stop..*pant*running*pant* so*pant* fast.*exhale*falls on ground* ouch.. ~tba- uh... update soon bye !!!11! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 17:49 CDT
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Hello there guy's.How are ya!well chapter 7 is up!I hope you like it.and I would like to say that in the next chapter will be Koga's bro Ryoga!And yes that's the Ryoga from Ranma 1/2.I decided to put him in because Sesshomaru probably would fell wierd being the only 11th grader in a group of 10th graders.So Ryoga is going to be in the 11th grade and be friend's with Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 21:22 CDT
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WOO HOO! Spring break is here!!!!That mean's more time to write chapters,sleep in, and go to sleep late!Okay peoples I'm working on the next chapter,but I was wondering if you guy's could help me out.Well,everyone know's that every school has a mascot. What do you think the shikon high mascot should be?Review and give me some suggestions please. And one last thing,thankyou for reviewing penguinsrule. Okay then,peace homies!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice. kagura got jumped. ~sessh- atleast i only got 2 girls fighting over me. ~tba- gee. wait till the girlz see u. u & ur friends will be chased. *giggle* ~sessh- panic- NO NO NO! DONT LISTEN TO HER! SHE'S CRAZY! no...... she... she's on...DRUGS! DRUGS I TELL U! DRUGS! ~tba- rrriggght. anywayz i luv it. update soon. bye! ~sessh- DONT LISTEN TO HERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA- OK SESSHY KINS- DRAGGS SESSH AWAY- ~SESSH- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: penguinsrule [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot!!!!! Hurry up girl, i ain't wasting all day here, i hope u'll get another chapter soon!
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 23:11 CST
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Alright reader's, I'm finished with annoying TAKS test's for now. So chapter 6 will be posted up tommorow probably around 7 or so. K guy's talk to ya lata!
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 21:40 CST
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Who wouldn't like your reviews there asome! Well I'm still working on chapter 6. I have had a lot going on in school latley, so I've been buissy. For example: We have to do the 7th grade writing test 2morrow,then me and my BFF Diana need to start are science project, and then we have a fitness test coming up after spring break next week. phew! It's pretty tuff for a 12 year old! Well got to go back to my difficult life, peace homies! (:p hee hee)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good thing some one likes my reviews! ~sessh- oh great. score 4 for the grudge. ~tba- growl- u wont let that go will u! ~kagura- GRUDGE! ~tba- just cause i have black hair. and am Asian means nothing! ~sessh- wait a sec... weren't we in a battle last time? ~tba- uh.. yea. u uh... see... this is the kagura bot. ~SESSH- SO.. WAT DID U DO TO KAGURA?! ~tba- nothing u can prove ~sessh- .... she's not supposed to die! ~tba-... and i should care... because... ~sessh- oh never mind. ~rin- yay! i get sesshy! ~tba- i look upon their relation ship in the anime as father & daughter. it looks sooo cute! although he's just as bad.. ~sessh- i may be evil. BUT at least I'm good at it. ~tba- is this b cause of the icon? ~sessh- get rid of it. ~rin- Wat icon? ~tba- its a fan girlz guide to sesshomaru. sesshomaru is misunderstood. some thing something. and the last party is..: remember: on ugly people are truly EVIL ~sessh- I'm neutral. ~tba- and yet. there's a i- ~sessh- puts hands over tba's mouth* uh.. pay no attention to the grudge! ~tba- mmm! *bits sessh's hand* BAKA! BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA! *HITS HIM WITH PURSE* ~sessh- ow! ow ow ow ow!!!!! ~kagura bot- that's Wat i call tough love ~kagura- in cage in forced with steel* let me out! ~rin- smirk* holds out magazine with sesshomaru's picture on the cover* u want it? ~kagura- SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~sessh- .. did u girlz hear something? ~tba- uh.. u mean not counting Ur really cute deep voice? no. ~sessh- oh OK. ~rin- laughs* ull never have sesshomaru! never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs away with magazine* ~tba- .... freaky! ~sessh- this is wat happens when i let her hang out with u! ~tba- no! she just had to much sugar! ~sessh- she doesn't eat candy! ~tba- shut up b 4 i stuff Ur mouth with candy. ~sessh- how's that a threat? ~tba- smirk* ULL be a pinata~ ~sessh- gasp* uh... lets think about this.. u... u.. dont want to do some thing hasty... heh...heh.. ~tba- oh well. ill let it slide this time. well. thanks 4 the answer. update soon k? ~sessh- u said that like... yesterday. ~tba- im not a person who cares. ~sessh- true. ~tba- *waves* bye! come on sessh. race u to the others!* runs off with sessh* ~kagura- DONT LEAVE ME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Title: Aswer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:42 CST
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Hey guy's thanks for reviewing. Chapter 6 will probably be up tommorow night or the next. theblackangels, I love how you write your review's,there really cool. And thank's Hitsugaya630 for reviewing! Also I would like to welcome to ARY2021! Anyway's guy's gotta go. LATER!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 20:59 CST
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Tba- FIGHT! ~sessh- violent* takes out soda & sits in his chair* ~tba- calm much? ~rin&kaugura- fighting 4 sessh's presence- HE'S MINE! ~tba- sigh* takes out popcorn- wat some sessh? ~sessh- thanks*takes pop corn* ~kagura&rin- GET HER! *GRAB TBA* ~tba- ahhh! *gets dragged in cat fight* ~sessh- stands up* this is getting intresting! ~rin- hits kagura* ~tba- hits kagura* ~kagura- hits tba & rin* ~tba+ rin- oh its on! ~sessh- throws swords + weapons to them* good luck. ~tba- throws dagger* ~sessh- oh hell! *ducks* uh... update soon? ~daggers- hits computer* ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, i love this story.. you have to hurry up and upload so i can see Ren kicks some ass
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:25 CST
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oh my god. Kagura's gonna get it! Love it. please update soon!!
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Title: Aswer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 18:34 CST
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Actually theblackangels, Kagura and Rin will get into a fight. And Kagura is going to be all over Sesshomaru. Whitch is really going to upset Rin. But i'm not going to tell you everything. Oh yeah and Rin is in the 10th grade. In the anime, i'm not really into Seeshomaru and Rin together romanticly. More of a brother, sister thing. But in fanfic's I like it romanticly. Cause you can make it to were Sessh is just a little bit older. Well anyway, pease review some more. And chapter 5 should be posted up by tonight. BYE!
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