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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good thing some one likes my reviews! ~sessh- oh great. score 4 for the grudge. ~tba- growl- u wont let that go will u! ~kagura- GRUDGE! ~tba- just cause i have black hair. and am Asian means nothing! ~sessh- wait a sec... weren't we in a battle last time? ~tba- uh.. yea. u uh... see... this is the kagura bot. ~SESSH- SO.. WAT DID U DO TO KAGURA?! ~tba- nothing u can prove ~sessh- .... she's not supposed to die! ~tba-... and i should care... because... ~sessh- oh never mind. ~rin- yay! i get sesshy! ~tba- i look upon their relation ship in the anime as father & daughter. it looks sooo cute! although he's just as bad.. ~sessh- i may be evil. BUT at least I'm good at it. ~tba- is this b cause of the icon? ~sessh- get rid of it. ~rin- Wat icon? ~tba- its a fan girlz guide to sesshomaru. sesshomaru is misunderstood. some thing something. and the last party is..: remember: on ugly people are truly EVIL ~sessh- I'm neutral. ~tba- and yet. there's a i- ~sessh- puts hands over tba's mouth* uh.. pay no attention to the grudge! ~tba- mmm! *bits sessh's hand* BAKA! BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA! *HITS HIM WITH PURSE* ~sessh- ow! ow ow ow ow!!!!! ~kagura bot- that's Wat i call tough love ~kagura- in cage in forced with steel* let me out! ~rin- smirk* holds out magazine with sesshomaru's picture on the cover* u want it? ~kagura- SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~sessh- .. did u girlz hear something? ~tba- uh.. u mean not counting Ur really cute deep voice? no. ~sessh- oh OK. ~rin- laughs* ull never have sesshomaru! never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs away with magazine* ~tba- .... freaky! ~sessh- this is wat happens when i let her hang out with u! ~tba- no! she just had to much sugar! ~sessh- she doesn't eat candy! ~tba- shut up b 4 i stuff Ur mouth with candy. ~sessh- how's that a threat? ~tba- smirk* ULL be a pinata~ ~sessh- gasp* uh... lets think about this.. u... u.. dont want to do some thing hasty... heh...heh.. ~tba- oh well. ill let it slide this time. well. thanks 4 the answer. update soon k? ~sessh- u said that like... yesterday. ~tba- im not a person who cares. ~sessh- true. ~tba- *waves* bye! come on sessh. race u to the others!* runs off with sessh* ~kagura- DONT LEAVE ME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Title: Aswer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:42 CST
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Hey guy's thanks for reviewing. Chapter 6 will probably be up tommorow night or the next. theblackangels, I love how you write your review's,there really cool. And thank's Hitsugaya630 for reviewing! Also I would like to welcome to ARY2021! Anyway's guy's gotta go. LATER!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 20:59 CST
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Tba- FIGHT! ~sessh- violent* takes out soda & sits in his chair* ~tba- calm much? ~rin&kaugura- fighting 4 sessh's presence- HE'S MINE! ~tba- sigh* takes out popcorn- wat some sessh? ~sessh- thanks*takes pop corn* ~kagura&rin- GET HER! *GRAB TBA* ~tba- ahhh! *gets dragged in cat fight* ~sessh- stands up* this is getting intresting! ~rin- hits kagura* ~tba- hits kagura* ~kagura- hits tba & rin* ~tba+ rin- oh its on! ~sessh- throws swords + weapons to them* good luck. ~tba- throws dagger* ~sessh- oh hell! *ducks* uh... update soon? ~daggers- hits computer* ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, i love this story.. you have to hurry up and upload so i can see Ren kicks some ass
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:25 CST
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oh my god. Kagura's gonna get it! Love it. please update soon!!
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Title: Aswer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 18:34 CST
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Actually theblackangels, Kagura and Rin will get into a fight. And Kagura is going to be all over Sesshomaru. Whitch is really going to upset Rin. But i'm not going to tell you everything. Oh yeah and Rin is in the 10th grade. In the anime, i'm not really into Seeshomaru and Rin together romanticly. More of a brother, sister thing. But in fanfic's I like it romanticly. Cause you can make it to were Sessh is just a little bit older. Well anyway, pease review some more. And chapter 5 should be posted up by tonight. BYE!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh sessh is actin like a idiot. ~kag- he alwayz does. ~inu- i dont really care. ~sessh- im a jerk. not a idiot. ~kags- a cute jerk. ~inu- a agnorant & stupid jerk. ~tba- well. he's my really cute yet agnorant & stupid jerk. ~sessh- ... oh.... tba... thats a double negitive. but i guess thats a complament. ~tba- cherish it. i dont do many. ~inu- thats true. but she has great taste. ~tba- .. for ur birth day i gave u a months supply of ramen.. ~inu- smile- AND I LOVED IT! ~sessh- u know if u eat to much. u get man boobs? ~inu- really? ~sessh- thats why i dont eat human food. ~tba-... i thought it was because i never see u eat. ~sessh- demons dont have to eat alot. about once a week is fine with me. ~tba- and whens that? when ur alone and no one can see u? secretive much? ~inu- yea. ~kag- uh.. howed we go from sesshomaru to food? ~tba- i dont know. but i do wonder wat grade rin's in. she has to be atleast 1 or two years younger than sessh. shes in love with him and its cute. it would b funny if kagura appeared and she flirted with sessh. ~sessh- uh.. ignore the crazy blabbing reviewer. plz dont do her idea... ~tba- and rin could come. and beat her up. then sessh would b inpressed. but not fully convinced. ~sessh- girlz always fight over me -smile- ~tba- wat do u mean? i fight WITH you. i dont fight FOR YOU NOR DO I fight other girlz for u ! BAKA! ( baka- idiot) ~sessh- and to think ur a fan. ~kag- the fans get creepier & creepier eh, sessh? ~inu- yea. but have u seen her room? total darkness. ~sessh- the sun couldnt light up that room. ~kags- its like hell there. soo pitch black... and scary.. ~tba- oh come'on guyz. its not that scary,. ~kags- how do u sleep at night? ~sessh- oh. shes the black angel. AkA..death. shes in love with the color black ~tba- not true! Black is the lack of colors! its not a color at all! `sessh- yep. she HAD top bring science in this. -sigh- ~kags- uh.. well update soon k? ~tba- yea, yea. wat kaggie said. bye. (i dont own them. (like duh)) ~TBA~
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 16:15 CST
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I would like to thank all of you who wrote reviews!!!! Oh yeah,I have to get some thing's strait:Sesshomaru dosn't get paired with Kagura,but they will get to know eachother. Sesshomaru is actually going to get paired with Rin. Rin will be in the next chapter, whitch will hopefully be posted up by tonight.And another thing,I don't actually know if Koga has a brother.Nothing in the anime say's he does,but im going to make up a character.Though im not sure if he will play a big role.And one last thing:in this story I decided to not have Koga like Kagome,they will just be good friend's.Well anyway's thank's again for the review's.Later!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INTRESTING. YAY! sango beat up kagura! ~sessh- says boredly- u still wish it was kikyo dont u. ~tba- sure. u think u could get kikyo to flirt with sessh and he could kick her? ~sess- ooh! i have a idea! ~TBA- wat? ~sessh- shut up! ~tba- ofcorse... i hope sessh doesnt get paired up with kagura. ~sessh- i wonder if the girlz are going to fight over me? ~inu- no girl would. ~tba- oh shut up inu. thats not nice. ~sessh- see. ~tba- shut up. i dont care about ur opinion. ~sessh- stupid aggorant fangirl. ~inu- SHE'S 1 OF UR FANS!!! ~tba- got a problem inu? ~inu-gulp- n... no ma'm ~sessh- she likes the tough and cold guyz. 4 some strange reason. ~inu- u got those two down. but the one thing she doesnt have is TASTE! ~TBA- OH. HA HA. its sooo funny i frogot to laugh- glare- ~sessh- bad mood? ~tba- maybe a smige ~inu- hold out manual- ok. i got the evacutation thingy. ok. it says. run ,duck, hide,. ~sessh- earthquake drill. ~inu- uh... -flips pages- stop , drop and roll? ~sessh- either a dance orfire drill. ~inu- flipps to last page- ok. i fond it. it sayz .. RUN! ~BOTH- runs far far away- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:47 CST
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aha I just relives something. Sess said dude in the earlier chapters. It was funny, cuz I had to re-read the damn thing. But good work with the paragraphs. And I like how this is going. I didn't know Koga had a brother...awesome! Love it, keep up the good work!
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:45 CST
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Yes Sesshomaru did just say dude.In this story Sesshomaru is actually nicer.But he still get's into dumb fight's with his brother.So don't worry he's not that different.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DID SESSH JUST SAY DUDE?! OH WELL... .its still funny. just that sessh itsnt as stuck up. which i like. but its good nonetheless. keep it up. update soon. bye. ~TBA~
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 17:01 CST
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Sorry guy's the ghetto parts aren't until chapter 3. That's when Sango,Miroku,and Koga are going to be introduced. Chapter 3 probably wont be posted until monday though. And sorry about the whole no paragraph's thing. I will try to make thing's more intresting. Anyway's thanx 4 da review's later!
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Reviewed By: Mabbline991220 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is pretty good and I also like where your story is going but it doesn't seem hip hop or "ghetto" as you put at all yet...If you added some slang and a little more additude to the charters then it would fit your description of the story and add a little bit of flava and style. Update soon !!! And can you try to double space or use smaller paragraphs s0o0o it would be easier to read
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story. Please update soon. Oh and maybe try to use paragraphs, so it doesn't bunch all your stuff together. Update soon! And Have A Nice Day!
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